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rule001 - move around

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second try on reason

i was trying to go for a pop/rock song.
I'm still trying to get the lyrics on.

Any ideas to make it better?
...please?

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Anonymous [be] - 11 years ago

Righton' brother!!
 

yaka [be] - 11 years ago

nice vibe .. I was thinking and i came up with the lyrics .. something like " where is my mind, or .. I am a passenger .. Perhaps combine those 2 ...
Greetz
 

Falcon030 [be] - 11 years ago

a have send you an earlier comment but it seems to been away here now ?
so when you need comments than dont delete it !± ok ?
 

rule001 [be] - 11 years ago

very weird!?!
I'm totally sure i didn't delete anything.
freaky.

Still, thanks for your comments, please keep sending them
(bad comments are just as welcome as ...well... not that bad comments)
 

Bedlam [be] - 11 years ago

I like it alot !

1 main thing is that it sound a bit apart and dry.
Right now you should focus on what you did now and work very hard on trying to make everything sound real. For example, the drums are very dry and upfront, maybe correct that by adding some compression (i never do it but oh well ) and especially some reverb. I cant hear any bass dunno if there is one (ok.. i might not be the best person to tell you that :) )
surely it need words, but overall a nice work... I never understood reason very well... I'm stuck with my synth that I can't let go so reason seems too complicated :) for a second try its certainly good ! I'm surprised with the niceness of the guitar i didnt know reason had such close to real samples :)

Good night ! :D
 

rule001 [be] - 11 years ago

thanks a lot for the comment!
i will totally try that!
 

leentje [be] - 11 years ago

not bad for a 'beginnerke'
 

Anonymous [be] - 11 years ago

not bad ...x
 

Rabauw [be] - 11 years ago

I like the scratching.
And the drums ofcourse :)

Mix isn't balanced though, drums too loud, guitars too silent.
 
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