Electrobel

just started I guess...

You have some nice ideas...

Well, you should experiment with fx to get the fruity sound out of it, especially on the beats...
Try some distortion, reverb, compression and eq...
Experiment with those...
Also some delays on the snare drum here and there...

Try to build some variation in the track, add a break, things like that...

Listen to some tracks in the sections u like...
Since you like electro, check that and ebm and maybe some indus tracks...

Dub tracks are good for inspiration on the use of reverb and delay...

for bass inspiration, check drum and bass

I agree 100% here with Distreality.
Feels too empty, even though you have some good ideas in it. I liked the odd drum patterns here and there, and some of the sounds are a bit raw and dirty. But it's too long and too empty to be good. But don't let this disencourage you. Your more recent tracks were already a lot better so your definitely on the right path my friend.

Good work, but everything is centered in the mix, just try to play with the stereo, for example putting some sounds right others left, using ping pong delays & panning effects for giving some dimensionnal space to the track.

Nice track; Could be better if the snare sound would change more & the bass more powerful. Sometimes less is more-> some parts would be more effective if there where less sounds used at a time.
Peace!

yeah, but don't take care of this, it's crap, honestly...i just made it as a first attempt, for fun...