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Bedlam - I can't see the light

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First rock song i put on here thats sort of hard !
Enjoy it, bang your head if you want. All is electronic except Guitars.

You're welcome to give any advice or remarks !

Version2: Changed the middle sequence. Better mixing.

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Understanding is a waste of time,
For all we're granted, all is divine,
As we stand in the line,
We'll follow to the other side,

Knowledge is our last consent,
All we ask for is contempt,
Luxury for both our mins,
All our troubles left behind.

Oh I can't see the light,
Oh I can't see the light,
It's like I'm surrounded,
By the depths I'm haunted.

I'm H-A-U-N-T-E-D

"Is there a way to explain,
My sorrowful memories ?
Is there another path
I can choose ?

Will there be a day,
Where i'll wake up and say,
That i'm happy
With a smile on my face,

Will i ever get out of
All this darkness around me?
Will i ever give up,
Being lonely,

Will I ever think of,
A happy melody
So I can sing
For the love of all

'Till Death to us part

Fear overcomes our desire,
Till death do us part,

Dark is our element
As we fade away
Deeper into what lies beneath us.

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rf061992 [be] - 8 years ago

Next one cool song mr Bedlam.... :)) ....yes....
 

brandtkalk [be] - 8 years ago

Happy to listen your voice Mr Bedlam! a real guitare!!!!
you playing?
 

Bedlam [be] - 8 years ago

Yep yep i play :)
 

Distreality [be] - 8 years ago

nice....
maybe the vocs indeed, but good track, thumbs up !!!
 

yenneman [be] - 8 years ago

Sadly enough my speakers are still broken after a long while, so I had no choice but listen with headphones...doesn't matter, it sounds good anyway.
I'm very, very impressed by the drums! Maybe the guitar is a bit too silent...composition and voice are nice (as always). The only thing I didn't like was the low voice at the end: sounds a bit silly ;). Better turn it into a whispering voice or something alike, just an idea.

Good stuff again.
 

Rabauw [be] - 8 years ago

Really love that synth voice, not too loud in my opinion. Nice riffing :) I agree with Yen about the drums, really sounds like a live drummer, not programmed, + the mix balance is good, really sounds like a "real" demotrack instead of programming.

The chorus melody is superb, and the style in general reminds me of HIM.

what I don't find fitting is the break with synths and piano. Not because of the music and composition - but because of the synthetic character of it. I mean, with your voice, guitar and drums it sounds very real, but the break there is such obvious programming it destroys a lot of the genuine demo-sphere. but apart from that, great song my friend.
 

rule001 [be] - 8 years ago

Waw! really amazing drums !!!
the voice may be a bit rougher (ruiger), but thats just personal tast i guess ;)
if it's rougher, u could easily change the deep voice at the end by.. idunno..a female voice (damm that would be sweet |) )

great!!!

 

Funky [be] - 8 years ago

Damn nice indeed! Good compo!
 

Bedlam [be] - 8 years ago

Thanks for all the nice comments,

There are some extra things to come before a real demoversion like

A little remodeling of the solo's by my faithful guitarist friend...
And I will try to improve the little calm part, maybe add drums... resing etc.... i suppose... probably ETA would be around 2 weeks :D cuz i'm so busy these days :D

Experiment on drums with reverb and a multiband compressor, and EQ and you should be able to get good sound like here ...
 

brandtkalk [be] - 7 years ago

i like, i like: gtr+ voice + piano!
you become a multi instrumentist mr Bedlam
 

LilDaze [be] - 7 years ago

you make me think of Adema. And that's a good thing! :p
very nice song
 

Bedlam [be] - 7 years ago

Thnx lildaze not the first time i'm being compared to anathema :) thnx alot !
 

Rabauw [be] - 7 years ago

I seem to notice some new drum patterns here and there, or am I mistaking?
Damn, still love that intro, really gets stuck between the ears... "I'm haunted..." ---> yes I'm haunted by the intro ;)

Still love it.
 

Distreality [be] - 7 years ago

good work !!
 

Bedlam [be] - 7 years ago

Thank you guys !
 

TalkyMist [be] - 7 years ago

nice ! Simply great music
 
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