Electrobel

well,

first of all, i like the main melo! but:
it misses some power, need to be much stronger, try other synth for example. I miss like i told u with your previous track some effects. I have a feeling your track is in different parts who aren't connected togheter, if you understand what i mean :) Also try to add a string pad, to create more depth in your track

forget the mastering to start now, try to build a good basis for your track,and than try to master it a bit.

I really like the melo, if u want, maybe i'll make a remix from it :) just pm me :)