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particle - there's a light at the end of the roa

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Again unfinished business ( smells like massive attack ) had some very very very uninspired weeks lately, almost thought i'd better quit producing in stead of irritating myself behind my screen. Bit of a emotional track ( i'm happy though :D ), maybe too much for some people's, it's a very raw version and needs more work ( and inspiration sheisse ) comments or advices appreciated
*edit: added some length, a variation and a part with a piano. I'm doubting a bit about the piano , what do you guys think? ( beats etc don't have much variations now, that's to be changed when the track's finished)

Edit 2 : Finally the final version :D i've followed filmjolk's advice because this song is coming my ears out! And it's a hard job to create some kind of story out of it. I thought if i don't do this this song will never get finished in a lifetime. It still sounds a bit raw, somehow i'm not able to make it sound fluently.. Hope you guys enjoy and i didn't screw it up. Now i can finally get my hands om something else :D

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SpazzMano [be] - 7 years ago

beautiful! a fav!, continue the progression in tension on beats and on pads, very good work
 

icteder [be] - 7 years ago

my comment to you is...finish it
 

uzumaki [be] - 7 years ago

Very good ambiant track , but a little too short for me,...
 

meutn [be] - 7 years ago

thx all! Yes uzumaki it's a bit short but it isn't finished either ;) . Will do my bestigste best to finish this one ( and all 1000 other ones )
 

CruizeOfFiction [be] - 7 years ago

slet!

kheb verdomme mn zakdoeken moeten bovenhalen. TOO FUCKING EMO FOR ME (emo= emotioneel)

manman, meutn doet het weer. Shit strakke stront sammy (DA EEN ALLITERATIE!!!). Uw beats klinken echt strak, in begin stond ik wat scpetisch: hoe in goedsnaam kunt ge daar beats bijsmijten die erbij horen, but you've done it!

werk em af, en weest fier

tot blaar
 

meutn [be] - 7 years ago

zeveraar :D maar toch bedankt jawel :))
 

teebo [be] - 7 years ago

prachtig
 

TheThreatOfDawn [be] - 7 years ago

sounds very sigur-ross-like at first. (until the beats start) I like the high sounds! it's a beautyfull intro to something else, not really a song on itself to my feeling. maybe make it little longer and add some second part if you want it as a stand-alone song?
 

SpazzMano [be] - 7 years ago

remind me some songs of BOC :)
 

SpazzMano [be] - 7 years ago

-- Comment deleted by SpazzMano--
 

SpazzMano [be] - 7 years ago

arf sorry fucking playlist comment
 

jeroenM [be] - 7 years ago

boards of canada go idm... nice track, expand it!
 

hosmOz [be] - 7 years ago

hargh....was just waiting the restart with a bassline...could be amazing and i was totally in...keep this up really good job meutn.
 

HarryPoppins [be] - 7 years ago

yah! greeatttt
 

stryder [be] - 7 years ago

love it!!
 

eeezzeepeezzeee [be] - 7 years ago

Schüne, really like ur beats here
first 2scnds; dayvan cowboy?
 

meutn [be] - 7 years ago

thx petekes!
to freezebeeze: nosé de synth lijkt er wel een beetje op achteraf gezien mr was niet de bedoeling ;) ( schitterend nummer trouwens :)) )
 

RedVade [be] - 7 years ago

wow really impressed...
Emotion is the lead.. like that..
what a great track, you'r obligated to finish it :)
and ow yeah, talk some more to your self on the wall, its good for my lachspierkes ^^ LOL

thumbs up, grtz
 

StorungStelle [be] - 7 years ago

nice track, allthough a little to short
 

HyeVolture [be] - 7 years ago

Nooit gedacht u hier tegen te komen, enfin, in feite was dat wel ergens te verwachten...uw liedje is prima, doet me denken aan sigur ros. Mocht effectief wel wat langer zijn geweest, maar prima gemasterd enzo, zowaar.

Greetz,

Q. aka hye
 

Voxcoder [be] - 7 years ago

to short it is, real nice
 

adya [be] - 7 years ago

whew hefty stuff. reminder of Boards of canada. if you ever feel like finishing it, doen e man!
 

dialekte [be] - 7 years ago

Super nice, it could be even longer
 

filmjolk [be] - 7 years ago

lovely! :o)
maybe the beats come to sudden (maybe a fade in) i was surprised when it arrived. i like the piano part. maybe you could make a ABA' song, so after the piano the first part of the song would come again but slightly different.
i am really impressed meutn, it's very very very good!
 

CruizeOfFiction [be] - 7 years ago

Supper geile edit jah.
Du machst kranke music, ich liebe das jah.
Supper smäcklich geile feltcher (tip: typ feltcher in op google (afbeeldingen)).
 

privecomcept1 [be] - 7 years ago

cool ambiance man 1 point
 

fabethefabulous [be] - 7 years ago

chouette atmosphere :)
Apaisant MMmmm..... nice track
@+ +
 

teebo [be] - 7 years ago

superb en horny in the cof-way!
 

pittaman [be] - 7 years ago

I don't like the synths in de beginning, a bit to sharp to my taste. But I do like the beats.

The piano gives me a sense of arrival, but I think it can use a bit more energy, it sounds a bit dull as it is now (the piano). And maybe introduce it in the beginning, together with the high sounding synths, and then take it out, and put it back in at the end. Just an idea, since you wanted some feedback on the piano.
 

jeroenM [be] - 7 years ago

Sounds quite happy to me actually... Not bounce-up-and-down-happy but certainly not sad... and it sounds very good to me.
Didn't really hear massive attack in it... they sound way darker
 

Anonymous [be] - 7 years ago

met Absynth synths gemaakt?

Sincerely,

Slough Of Dispond
 

meutn [be] - 7 years ago

Thx everyone, all this feedback makes my day!
@Slough Of Dispond : Alles is gemaakt in reason
 

DeHomunculus [be] - 7 years ago

i'd make that blub-bass a little louder. might be just me. besides of that, this is one of those tracks that make me wish: if only i were that good. and that's when it strikes: the idea that maybe someday I am gonna make THE ENTIRE WORLD wish this... naive? not a bit! honest answer to question: naive? even less!
 

stryder [be] - 7 years ago

zot goe
 

filmjolk [be] - 7 years ago

hehe ^^ i feel so honoured you listened to my advice ^^
well we have the feeling that the song is finished while listening. Maybe the A' is a bit short but i understand that you don't want to spend any more time on the same song :D good work!
 

meutn [be] - 7 years ago

hehe thx filmjolk! ( and stryder and dehomonculus too offcourse ;) )
 

antares [be] - 7 years ago

Man great athmosphere, beats are good to! Very chill track, piano is nice also, i like how you change between the 2 parts
Greets
 

hosmOz [be] - 7 years ago

hey meutn, to me, your first version was better, if my remember is right, the intro was shorter and there was less fx on them, the emotional side is getting lost in my humble opinion now. I would aslo love the bit a bit higher in the mix...
still a very good track, but not hearting me as the previous version...thumbzz up
greetzz
 

eeezzeepeezzeee [be] - 7 years ago

Love this song!!
only remark here on the piano;It's a nice melodie but you should try and make it more lively, because I can't hear enough emotion through it..
Well done! Greetz
 

adya [be] - 7 years ago

are ie es pie ie see tie
:)
(respect)
 

HyeVolture [be] - 7 years ago

De vorigen edit deed mij aanvankelijk schriken: sammy man, ge had een rustige tearjerker omgetoverd tot iets hectisch! Maar ik moet zeggen dat het in feite wel iets heeft dat gewaaaaaw. Het maakt het alvast zweven in de lucht ipv drijven op een donker meer (om maar es beeldspraak te gebruiken). Over t pianostukske: tklinkt wel goe vind ik, maar tmag idd ook iets meer vloeiend (ik denk da pianostukskes gewoon ni moeten uitgetekend worden, maar echt live moeten gespeeld worden om in een nummer te passen, maar bon, persoonlijke opinie mss). Alvast vette duim omhoog, mooi werk!
 

Akwalek [be] - 7 years ago

your sounds r great, and part of some falls notes i really like your melo...maybe add another instrument and a high melo + a climax?... dont loose faith in your self...i love that piano...
 

Distreality [be] - 7 years ago

good composition here !
 

TheThreatOfDawn [be] - 7 years ago

Hey this new, finished version sounds really overall GOOD! I like the pianoparts that you added! Still get that sigur ross feeling... gonna ad it to my favs!! You should finish more songs (like this)
 

Zool [be] - 7 years ago

Beautiful, sounds a bit Fennesz to me, but hey that's a compliment!
The pianopart comes at the right time for variation.
 

edith [be] - 7 years ago

ganz schön !
 

Gandharva [be] - 7 years ago

"straight from the heart!"...

now that would be a gay way of saying...

"koosjer!" :p
 

Skip [be] - 7 years ago

kben fan

goe gerief!
 

eckhart [be] - 7 years ago

nice song man..
 

Doorchaser [be] - 7 years ago

Hoelaa nice gemasterd ook. de sound is krakens oud en crispy nieuw! 'k da wel smaken!
 

crolerbedo [be] - 7 years ago

yeaah it really sounds like some BoC man, impressive...
Very good sounds, cool beats and nice evolution, if find the story quite fluent in fact...
Just a bit short, the main sensitive part could come back as said before, with slight changes, as an outro...
Bah anyway, very good track m'boy
 

bitrille [be] - 7 years ago

Sweet synth and harmony..
 

JabbaAndFollox [be] - 7 years ago

shame i haven't commented this one yet...amazing...really..nothing else to say (by the way after the exams we do a stuikfilmavond é :) ) cheerz, phollox.
 

Jeller [be] - 6 years ago

dik in orde mr sammy!!
 

HarryPoppins [be] - 6 years ago

hoera!
 
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