Electrobel

not bad but a little very basic sounding i think, should need some more work :)

The melody is really great!

As for the sound, I think the lead should be OK one or two octaves higher, and replace the rythmics by some more trancy rythmics (the clap/snare on the kick drum is a very outdated pattern in trance). Then it's a matter of EQualising most of the instruments to, for example, remove the lower frequencies on the lead and on the choirs, put more high-end at the choir, soften the snare and the crash, put more high-end in the kick-drum...

Nice work anyway, there is definitely a great potential.

Yes, at the begining I thought that I was listening a Jumpstyle track cause of the claps :p
But after some sounds the trance atmosphere comes, not bad but ok with Jordan says!

as Nunne says, it sounds a bit basic, like your structure and melodies