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First song in with new software
includes some 'squeeks', a loud 'baf' en some ge-'roffelderoffel'
enjoy!

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firefrog [be] - 10 years ago

structural minimal chaos :D
you have vcery good sounds in it, but whatch out that you don't make it too bombastik. i don't really like the clap u used; maybe use a more lo-fi cluttering one that isn't so "bright" and with some dark reverb on it. you low freq could use some major boost imho: pump your bass and maybe add a deep baseline to have good fundaments
overall nice psychedelic trip!
 

FedIvers [be] - 10 years ago

Very original and quality stuff! Experimental in sound and structure. I realy like the percussion's contra-rythm a lot. Maybe the elevating sound is too loud at times and you could try to use a filter or something on the clap to make it a bit softer. But other then that... Great track! I think you can handle Cubase just fine... Grtz
 

user [be] - 10 years ago

Very usefull comments, thanks a lot!
 

ReftsidelighT [be] - 10 years ago

hey interesting and original track! certainly qua sounds...quite adventurous stuff! i love it! there seems some more room for a fuller subbass-frequency as firefrog pointed out... maybe you don't have to add much more but just make your kick a bit louder and deeper, but with reducing the attack, so it gets a bit softer and smoother... longer with way more sub... Also the claps can use a bit more subtlty imho.. do I hear multiple claps at once? Maybe making them all extremely short (like all you have left would be a short series of 'pekskes') 'xcept for the last one and equalising it a bit more to the background (reducing the high mid-frequencies) so it merges more into the whole... Anyway I think this can get very strong with a more balanced mix... good job already!!
 

RedVade [be] - 10 years ago

all the fx elements and weird noizes are waay to loud for the Kickdrum etc.. very werid minaL..; didn't like it at all

Thumb for the work
 

firefrog [be] - 10 years ago

to make the beat deeper, you could put some lo-pass filtered reverb on it with a good resonance on a very low frequency. like that, it not's only gets very deep, but also very dark en spacey ;)

just before 3.30 you have that lifting plane-effect, but the way it goes over to the beat part again is kinda dull imho. you should try to already let it go away before the beat start instead of after (like: wwwhhoooeesshhh....boom boom boom...)
 

user [be] - 10 years ago

thanks all, very handy comments!
gonna try al suggestions and re-upload in a few days or so...
 

Voxcoder [be] - 10 years ago

real nice one
 
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