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Photelect - Pedestrian of bottom

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My first ended track, a simple song.

It's not a technical performance, but I wanted to research different possibilities with a limited number of intruments.

Precision: No mastering... I don't like FL Studio too much, but I have no choice for the moment, my hardware is too limited (448mo of Ram... Hum)

Waiting for CSX3 (4?)

Add your comments, it can help me for the continuation.

I learn, I learn!

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reaman [be] - 7 years ago

was it intentionally that the rythm pushed back the main plucked melody? I think it's a little too much in the back. This song has good ideas but most transitions and progressions are a bit predictable.
You could use a bass where you have the rythm in solo. The trancy sawsound suits well and makes a surprise entry but after a while it starts sounding like a duck too much. You should play the release a little more to get more variation in the length - even if it was minimal.
the rythm is sometimes a little empty compared to the quickness of the other instruments.
this is my opinion, I hope it is usefull.
 

crolerbedo [be] - 7 years ago

Compo is nice, but sounds are too "FLstudio"...you can already change them quite a lot with some FX...
Then, FL doesn't suck man, i think if you learn how to use it, you can make pretty cool things, with a bunch of samples and vst's still, 'cuz i agree that the soundbank is quite cheap but still....
Welcome
 

reaman [be] - 7 years ago

all my music is FLStudio and prior... (but with some vst's)
 

Photelect [be] - 7 years ago

The samples and Vsti's are strangers to FL (except Sytrus).

But I haven't got a lot for the moment...

So, it will be for the next tracks! :D
 

LeBelgeElectrod [be] - 7 years ago

Hell yeah, this is good :)

try to rework the structrure which are maybe too progressiv, keep an ear on the reverberation this is a little strange sometimes. this need background also an more intervention. the sound is not bad but maybe the rythmik need to come more in front (play with the volume and the reverb) nice ambiance r-one sayd more variation maybe (but not too i think)

arf, voilivoila
 

BambY [be] - 7 years ago

this is a good start !

melody are great, i think the sound will be better with some vst, but i know your computer, and i think that when you will have a better workstation you will make the difference !

so, maybe just a comment, the bass steel behind, and i love big bass :p
 

JabbaAndFollox [be] - 7 years ago

nice flow! beats could be more edgy, but thats just a personal opinion (cuz it more a chill track) i like the trancy sound @ 3 min. nice first ended track, but i agree with LeBelgeElectrod that you should maybe rework the structure a bit, build-up, climax, breakdown, introducing new melo's..thumb up anyway!
 
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