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Despoilah - Introduction with the devil

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One day masterpiece, I'd like to send this out to different labels xross the globe, and I was wondering if you people find this "proffesional" or "good enough" to send to record labels, please tell me EVERYTHING that could be better or etc.

Thanks Despoilah. xxx ^_^

*edit* : Is it better now ?

*added kick
*added more bass and cut the breaks a little
*did a rework on some breax here n there

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aphone [be] - 9 years ago

hum to me it sounds very noisy, im listening on laptop speakers so i miss a lot of your work, sorry... i "think" its good quality and nice breackore but i really dont know, the melodys are very dark thts good, the intro should last longer for me and heuu its too break and not enough core. LOL dont mind my comm plz ^^ send it man, what will you loose?
 

Despoilah [be] - 9 years ago

I dunno, I'ts because its the first time I'll do anything like this and im freaking out about this, and about the to much break I'll try to loosen that up but I kinda like the chaos, IM MADE FOR CHAOS but Ill try to do that and make different versions.
 

MDeMmA [be] - 9 years ago

nice, alleen mis ik vuilere kicks, en kzou ook nog n ander afwissel loop derin steke, en het geheel duurt een beetje te lang naar mijn zin, kzou t n beetje korter make zoda de loop ni echt vervelend word na n tijdje, ma ge hebt der echt al de proffseionele sound in, zou t zeker opsture
 

Anonymous [be] - 9 years ago

Play with anticipation with the break (make it drop out sometimes), with the bass (double/quadruple tempo) and maybe give the whistle a slightly bigger role :D Other than that, nice track, really dig some of the melody breaks
 

Skip [be] - 9 years ago

really enjoyed listening to it
I think its original in the sense of using small details in combination with your pads (or wathever,long notes)
imo the beat at 2;50 till the end shouldnt last that long.but im not a brkcre specialist.
Thats pretty much everything I can think of.
It shure as HELL is good n'uff and/or professional,really.
Its allmost like luxuriously professional.
Eccept for the 2;50 loop that lasts till the end,but...you know,z'my opinion.
succes nog verder

 

bandarlog [be] - 9 years ago

Ah damned stupid pc and lousy internet...wrote a whole review. Ok, in short:

balance: ok
stereo: ok
clearness: ok (dunno much about breakcore though)
mix: try 2-5db notch cut around 2-2.5khz (high snares and percussion) and try a 1-4 dB boost around 60-80hz (deep basses, maybe use some bass maximiser with much care). mind that you don't touch low mids (200-500hz) cause they're fine as they are.

 

Despoilah [be] - 9 years ago

thanks I'll try that !
 

Anonymous [be] - 9 years ago

loved it...great sound...wicked and sugary sweet....seriously, this track kicks ass!

maybe a nasty kick from time to time would spice things up a bit...and a bit more variation in the breaks at the end...

ps you better listen to bandarlog, his tracks are always properly mastered
 

Despoilah [be] - 9 years ago

Thats why I asked him to comment on my tracks, I know of his genious !
 

Despoilah [be] - 9 years ago

Heb trouwens al een GO van Murder channel gekregen dus JAPAN HERE I COME !
 

teebo [be] - 9 years ago

niet echt mijn ding maar kmoet wel zeggen puik werk! lekkere koor
ik kan het echt niet vergelijken maar het klinkt allesinds zeer goed
go terrorise the jappen!
 

DeHomunculus [be] - 9 years ago

i think the only thing that could be bether is your mental sanity :D love you brethren! thumbie wumbie uppieduppie.
 

crolerbedo [be] - 9 years ago

nice work, but too much "sound destruction" for me... i like the hard parts, but they are really too hectic (for me hééé)
 

MWE [be] - 9 years ago

fucking nice!
 

icteder [be] - 9 years ago

well despoilah, to be honest...i think it's a real masterpiece
 

icteder [be] - 9 years ago

sounds like an kermiscentenbak out of control.or like a pinball that keeps bouncing between those bumpers.great man really loved the experience.and so much energy
 

Despoilah [be] - 9 years ago

thank you man you so made my day !
 

HarryPoppins [be] - 9 years ago

reall nice rommelprutcore
i like it! maybe you could punch your sound a bit more by compressing the beats and adding more bass to it
sounds allready fat, but it could sound even fatttttter (like bvb drumcorps' amens, they sound very hellyeah spanky)
real nice track man!! and the darksteppy part is also very great
one more remarc, maybe you could add more ambient soundscapes on top, more layers to make it even darker
prima kerel, blijven aan werken en dan opstuuurn :)
 

Freakywrath [fr] - 9 years ago

wow that's massive sound
great
 

soundscape [be] - 9 years ago

This is fat man.
Like the dark part!!!
only comments: sound like two different songs in one.
The second half is a little too long in terms of same break being looped a little to much.And a little more compression and bass would make it even darker and fatter.
 

hosmOz [be] - 9 years ago

yea it s a nice one for sure, personnaly i just really dont like the lilte cut of 8 bit synth in the first part. And harry is right about some compression work to give the power...
greetz and thumbz up
 

Despoilah [be] - 9 years ago

Hi and thanks for this massive feedback, I think this is my most listened song in such short period of time !

Mister Sickboy told me to use L2 Ultramaximizer to pump up my sound, I've been experimenting alot of variations on this track with only the Darksteppy part but I dont know about it, I find the originel the best.

And Bandarlog thanks for the mix info it helped me alot.

I love all of you guys
 

HarryPoppins [be] - 9 years ago

yepz L2 is good and the EQ2 of frutiy is good too to boost yer bass and hitones after compressing
and best you compress your seperate fxchannels (especially them breax) and not yer master
voila, now mrharry also gave his gedacht ;)
 

Anonymous [be] - 9 years ago

Dude ik zweer et stuur et op
ik reken u echt al mee met DE breakcore artisten van belgie dus wrm zoude u kans nie wagen bij een record label?
ge woon doen!

groeten ,
Sam
 

Despoilah [be] - 9 years ago

Oh, merci :D kzal et doen.
 

LilDaze [be] - 9 years ago

i share the opinion of mr anonymous sam, your breakcore is the best i've heard so far ( but not that i listen to breakcore a lot.)
 

Archangel [be] - 9 years ago

i enjoy everything you make;)
 

Despoilah [be] - 9 years ago

thanks archangel =)
 

teebo [be] - 9 years ago

damn this is good
+fav
 

Anonymous [be] - 9 years ago

bajaat gij. Naar t einde toe wordt het zelfs crazier
 

Anonymous [be] - 9 years ago

great song but fuck record labels
 

Despoilah [be] - 9 years ago

how am I supposed to make money then ?
 

omihoshbin [be] - 9 years ago

mss een beetje aant aar getrokken ma ...... goan werken! ;d
 

omihoshbin [be] - 9 years ago

nice song btw ;) P.S. whowha, t'ijnde is wa beestig
 

Despoilah [be] - 8 years ago

ja werken ^^ HAH
 

Khaozeng1ne [be] - 8 years ago

not bad
put more variation in u breakz
en maak u kick vuiller (let it rip tha shit) xD
nice vocalz
Khaoz Engine
 

Aceton [be] - 8 years ago

great track dude the mood you create here its banging my brain out :D
great breakz ,maybe some more disto kicks
cheers
 
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