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ZARk - G10

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Trying to find inspiration again i guess.

This is a track i started in july, didn't get around to finishing it ..
tryed again tonite, but still couldn't do it ...


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Rabauw [be] - 9 years ago

hmm.... not many good ideas in my view... terribly boring to be honest. Sure you can do better than this man? I'd say "right click --> delete" ;-) and try something new. I really don't see how you'll ever produce something fine out of this little brainstorming? But maybe it could be a challenge to prove me wrong with this one ;-)
 

Skip [be] - 9 years ago

???...I find it kinda sweet tough.
Like the minimalness.
Makes me think of being a kid on a saturday morning and having all weekend to play with my toys,having no worries what so ever.I dont find it boring at all to be honnest,theres evolution in it so.
What I would change....hmmm...Ill try to add one element for melody (maybe try a little long-noted string or organ)and one for the beat (some little hihats maybe or shakers)
I think an appropriate tittle is needed (its a typical title for an "unfinished track isnt it?)
cheerz
 

Elkhor [be] - 9 years ago

ya man, it's so emptyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy, please try to improved that with some glitch, more melodies with pad and hit :)

tchousss anyway :p
 

SpazzMano [be] - 9 years ago

c'est la période du manque d'inspiration on dirait :d
 

dontwakemeup [be] - 9 years ago

i don't find it boring... but i don't like the second part very much (with the rhytm). Imo, it's the first part that should be worked/improved. Or just make it shorter and make a kind of transition track (cfr. to DJ Cam's album: Substances)
 

particle [be] - 9 years ago

i don't agree with rabauw, just some more work is needed here, some extra synths and pads as mentioned would do the trick :)
kinda sweet indeed
 

HarryPoppins [be] - 9 years ago

I kinda like it too..
funny stuff
now some live beatboxing on top and your off!
 

LeBelgeElectrod [be] - 9 years ago

me i call this music minimal :°)
 

LilDaze [be] - 9 years ago

funny melodies, i like it
 

NotAnameYet [be] - 9 years ago

i like it, because i know those day's where u have a melodie, and it sounds like shit, but it keeps twirling around ure head, stay on it a few more days, it 'll come, and then.... KaBOOM!!!!
 

Distreality [be] - 9 years ago

still some work to do, but it's icz for sumetin right....

the rhytm part should be compressed and eq-ed again imho, more punch

the melody needs verbs and delays if u ask me to make it flow more

for the rest, maybe some cool copyright free sampling?

still there's sumetin in this track that can become a good one, keep tinkering ^^
 

Falcon030 [be] - 9 years ago

this song comes from an empty head ! its simple and clean ! this means that the maker has his head full of other things and liked now to be simple tunes around ! its like when times agoo things where easier !
 

demurge [be] - 9 years ago

perhaps adding a soft, filtered bassline could inflate the first part of the song? like the melos and the mood very much!
 
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