Electrobel

yeah dude keep on keepin on

samforce?

The voice is not synchronous with the beat and need more "maturity", I mean, music is more than 1 octave, singing is more than "shouting" some words or playing with it like all R'n'B "stars", you'll have to put your soul in it, so we can feel some emotions.

The sound textures sounds very "cheap" like a pseudo-traditional & so disappointing show I saw in Tunisia. But it's just a question of taste.

I strongly suggest you try to add something original to your music to make it stand out of other R'n B things,or wathever its called these days.
Should get an easier name too.
Try to get some interest in all kindz of music styles.And get inspired that way,instead of making stuff based on 1 style
Recycling is better than imitating.

hehehehe....funny

i's the second time I listen it:It's minimalist, but, that could be a It!!

boem boem clap boemboem boem clap....
sorry dude, i don't like falset voices
but thumb up for trying

Good voice, your voice is quite original. From me the instrumental is not worse but should be more varying, i mean that it would be greater if during the chorus, the instrumental become more engergying....

(sorry for my english, i do what i can)

thanks for the comment buth don't forget i am only 18 years old and all my songs ar full produced by myself

My God, so sweet, take care for your girl dude.