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MnemOnic - p_uterisation.com

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When I began I wanted to make an ambient track. Just could resist them drumkits.

I am content of the firts half. Second part still needs a lot of work doh!

Subject: Computerisation of our current reality.






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particle [be] - 9 years ago

great stuff but i think it misses an extra element, how about a deep sub bass?
 

dialekte [be] - 9 years ago

yeah add a sub bass, nice track
 

Skip [be] - 9 years ago

smooth start...awesome drum programming,totally love it.And those slow waves really add up,I mean the soft pads.
the break at 01:35 and the classic guitarsounds are ...maybe too different elements in comparison with the beginning of the track,...
Till 02:51 is long for a break imo,I wouldev focused around those beats....and they stop a bit too often,too many stops/breaks.
I would indeed defenetly add some basssss...Or just boost up the lowest pads to see what.
These voices at 04:10...it all works...but its maybe too many ideas in one.(not shure)
05:00 verry cool buildup and cool beat-element addition.
hmmm...I take my words back about the guitar...cause now I see the whole track is based on it...I defenetly would add a sub layer with a regular base guitar,that uses a totally different rhytem,maybe a rhytem with more/faster notes than the guitar.

1-from start to 01:04 is to me a whole other track than 01:04 till the end...
2-should concider using a bass guitar to support the single guitar and to make the bridge between padz/synths and single guitar more "visible"....and so,have stronger harmonics...but that wouldnt be the main issiue here.

cheerz dude
 

particle [be] - 9 years ago

yes man! good!
 

baart [be] - 9 years ago

saved on hd, says nough :D
 

Skip [be] - 9 years ago

overall smooth transactions,nice work.
Its a verry "horizontal" track,I mean the continuity...(?)
Almost like ambient...(?)
A bit "cold" in its total (sober), but nevertheless good piece I think.
smooth sentimentality.
you could,I say you could add more subtle fx'es and details,but ...you know,it would be a too drastic change imo...
cheerz
 

crolerbedo [be] - 9 years ago

Oh yes, I love the arabic atmosphere and those little waterdrops in the first part... really nice feeling it gives...
The shift towards the more artificial part (around 4.00) is really smooth and quite surprising, the transition is unpredictable and doesn't disappoint the hearer( me in this case :)) )
I like it, well done, maybe it could bit more intense, you know... like... something, can't explain but you could go further...

 
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