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Omyiga - Willen maar niet kunnen

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Postrock/Ambient, inspired by "New Animals from the Air" of Eluvium and "Untitled 3" of Sigur Rós
(which I will never be able to evenaar, but achja)

It's almost but not entirely finished, some mistakes/gitaarhaperingen enzo

constructive comments on anything are very welcome (ge moet zelfs van mij!)



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BpOlar [be] - 9 years ago

not bad at all ... maybe add some layers with other subtle sounds
 

teebo [be] - 9 years ago

i like it weer a lot
you could add some more contrast in your song, and please make it longer
good job, going to save it after update
 

Omyiga [be] - 9 years ago

thanx bpolar en teebo,
I'll try to work on it when I find the time/goesting; but there are nog a few foutjes in dus kga t zowizo nog keer bewerken

grtn
 

Akwalek [be] - 9 years ago

for complete sigur build up i think u can even slow it down just a bit, like 5 to 10 bpm or somethin...especialy the beginning,maybe add some fade out space between the first 10 notes... and then idd, add some subtile fxtjes, soundjes...is onderweg nr pracht track, finish it....traaaaaaaaaaaag beginne, altijd versnelle nr climax, pets, een "meertje", klein after climax-zinderingske, en een outroke, melokes zitte goe, add spetteringskes
 

Midiot [be] - 9 years ago

sounds great! I would add a subtle delay/reverb on those reversed guitars in the beginning. I love it, great climax!
 

Skip [be] - 9 years ago

indeed verry icelandic
beautifull mood ...man man man....some evolution in your music again...

!you could automate the bpm,cuz what coleague Akwalek says is a good thought.
So I would try to start at -10bpm and go up until the solo guitar is fully hearable.
Also indeed,one more element would be good.
(little more work on that solo;)but i understand you have to record it doin it live and all...here and there some tones missing,ge weetwel)

"(wich I will never evenaar)" -ok but putting your own twist in it could satisfie you even more.

talent allover
 

Midiot [be] - 9 years ago

idd nice evolution. But so much and detailed suggestions :p I would keep it like it is, it's great
 

Omyiga [be] - 9 years ago

^^ thanks dudes
automating bmp enal are things which I would never think of myself, but I'll definietly try it in den edit

and yeah, off course I don't want to copy sigur ros completely é, it's just the buildup structure and the feeling in it that I kept a bit in the back of my mind
 

CruizeOfFiction [be] - 9 years ago

very nice track, tho sometimes not enough evolution (allezja, iet te traag op gang nr mijn goesting. Allezja moestet nu gans samenduwen 3.30 min duren ofzo, kzout perfecter vinden snapte)

realy like the end

thumb up, your doing realy nicely man!
 

omihoshbin [be] - 9 years ago

lekerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
 

ShiZen [be] - 9 years ago

leuk nummer... zou t geluid van een kabbelend beekje op de achtergrond geen goed idee zijn? evtl mee beginnen en langzaam uitfaden ofzo?
 

Wes [be] - 9 years ago

Good ambient is hard to find I think.. but I found some right here! Great atmosphere, good amount of emotion in the track.. I also like the climax. Thumbs up!
 

transynth [be] - 9 years ago

Your sound is very calming, some fine ambient it is.Keep it up
 

eckhart [be] - 9 years ago

zeer mooi !ç
 

particle [be] - 9 years ago

om van te smelten! ( beetje op eq letten , alhoewel kzit ook op onbetrouwbare boxen )
very good yes thankyou!
 

particle [be] - 9 years ago

buildup is exactly as it needs to be, very nice and floating!
 

Rabauw [be] - 9 years ago

I do think there is enough contrast in the song. Just compare the first part to the second... even though it comes from a progressive composition I do think it provides enough contrast.

Good moodsetting.

and when you let go of the harsher part to return to the calmer part, it awakens the listener. Nice outro too.
 
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