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pffff....
another old fart where I need some of your thoughts.
made the first melody early 2008, added beats and other things few months later...so now its going online.
Its 6/4 ,melodic beat-oriented listening track.

biggest question is what do you think of that 80's kinda synth in the middle....fits or not?





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Tomastar [be] - 9 years ago

I like this synth! Very old school
The beat is a little too simple i think. Perhaps you should made it more "complex" with some breaks.
That's just my mind^^
Nice one as usual
 

Rabauw [be] - 9 years ago

I would leave out the bass synth if I were you. It's too loud, too odd and takes away too much attention from everything else, which was a chill composition but I had to focus too much to hear the melodies.
 

Omyiga [be] - 9 years ago

I like the melody in the beginning very much, euhh idd maybe more complex beats. That bass at the end is ciool too btw
grtz
 

omihoshbin [be] - 9 years ago

sounds like chiptune to me^^
probably skiptune I guess.
not bad but I'm not really enthusiastic about it,
it sounds to clean for me , however, the melos are great and structure tight.
the beats could use a more jungle feel instead of a dnb break feel imo.
cheers
 

CruizeOfFiction [be] - 9 years ago

hmmm, kvind die bassynth beetje teveel op de voorgrond.. zeker potentieel, maar niet zo uberfeestmassive² vergeleken met gewoonlijk^^

toch een duimpje omhoog hoor!
cheers
 

Skip [be] - 9 years ago

thanx all ,remember its a listening track.

agree on bass synth at the end
agree on beats having to be heavier at seciond part azo...
Ill see what Ill do

(I think the first melo's and first beat are exactly how I wanted it)

thanx for yer time
 

crolerbedo [be] - 9 years ago

the 80's on the left side is cool (well it sounds more 80 than the center one, so i guess that's the one you're talkin'about), but the aow aow synth is a bit too heavy, especially when the not is held...I would drop that and use a soft bassy pad (or something that can sound soft and "vibrating" at the same time).

Like the compo very very much, and i hope it is still going to evolve.

I agree with tomastar about the beat, a bit light, some details would be cool...

Go on mate, finish it off, that's all it deserves
 

Skip [be] - 9 years ago

(with the 80's synth I mean the one comming in with a fade in at 01:20-01:25)

thanx croler, yes will work on it,needed advice, thats why I put it online. yooo
 

crolerbedo [be] - 9 years ago

mmmyeah... heum...
considering what you've got until now, it doesn't really fit imo 'cuz the sound is quite sharp, whereas the rest (except for the beat) is quite "round"...

But it can make a nice contrast, i mean it's not really a problem as it is now...

In fact, i think if you choose one of the too (contrast or homogeneity), it will be better...

Oh, and some chords with that synth would be cool, make it deeper and i think that's where this track will go...deep

And finally, when relistening, I would (but that's again just an opinion)definitely drop that aowing bass and add a softer one...
 

adya [be] - 9 years ago

like the compo and sounds.
think you did a good job so far.
finish the stuff (: !
 

MrBadMonkey [be] - 9 years ago

jep nice tracksken...maybee some more complex drumshizzlemydizzle?
 

eckhart [be] - 9 years ago

sounds remind me of the godfather in some way, cool stuff
 

Mnemonck [be] - 9 years ago

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pigster [be] - 9 years ago

the melody at the start if lovely and worth hanging onto :)
the 80s synth fits as well, though maybe abit too quiet if anything?
 

Anonymous [be] - 9 years ago

niceeee !!!
 

Anonymous [be] - 9 years ago

Nice work!!!
 

pornoPK [be] - 8 years ago

nice!!!!
 

ZoOlR [be] - 7 years ago

luv it
 
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