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Rag - Some Old Tale

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I'm really insure about this one (especially about the beats) so please add some comments and tips,
oh and maybe it needs more melo's, don't know really
hope you enjoy

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crolerbedo [be] - 8 years ago

nice atmo, fresh ambiance...
Now it's a bit long as it is, lacks variations and a bit of intensity. Kick is hardly heard and the snare is too low as well...
Good basic idea, needs more work
 

Skip [be] - 8 years ago

I think the beats are kinda good as they are, they keep things kinda soft like the totallity of the track,...well maybe just the kicks could be a bit clearer ,like the melodys, nice 'n dreamy.
I would shorten the intro with 30 sec or something.
maybe add higher piano notes at the end as a fade in ,as a slow evolution towards a little climax maybe.
like them cymballz.
verry nice track actually.
fits your profile pic.
 

liquidbass [be] - 8 years ago

excellent!!!!
 

Rag [be] - 8 years ago

thx,
variation and climax was one of the things i was very insure of so I'm glad you mentioned it
an edit will foliow
 

Anonymous [be] - 8 years ago

reall nice music, this one . greetings from crashzident, luxembourg
 

Anonymous [be] - 8 years ago

really like this one.
 

antares [be] - 8 years ago

As i already told you, nice one!! Part at the end is much nicer!! but i still don't like the drumrolls you used, sounds too synthetic, but that's the only 'bad' thing i can say about the track :)
greets
 

HyeVolture [be] - 8 years ago

intro is indeed a bit too long, but a good intro. it's interesting to choose between: a) something repeated over and over again, with some fx added, or b) just make some stuff shorter. it's not that it bothers that much, but my experience says that this choice makes it interesting to listen again and again. the song as a whole is really good. you're on a good go. thumb up.
 

Rag [be] - 8 years ago

thank you for the nice comments,
still thinking what to do with the drumrolls...
 

aphone [be] - 8 years ago

you could use some lill glitch for the drums, no need to do big changes imho, its fine like this already... nice track, cool vibe :)
 

eckhart [be] - 8 years ago

enjoyed it
 

Tjahzi [be] - 8 years ago

great track!
 

Omyiga [be] - 8 years ago

very nice atmo idd
I'm going to save it(:
 

Rag [be] - 8 years ago

thanks a lot :)
 

Anonymous [be] - 8 years ago

love the melody, but as you say, the beats are kinda non existant at the beginning.
Make a shorter intro, put some stronger beats.
 

yaka [be] - 8 years ago

wow...!!! Like the drama in it ..
 

hennoxlane [be] - 8 years ago

Like it a lot, brings about a very sweet mood;

but one remark though, there's a bit too much reverb on the beats, which makes them a little bit too spacy imo!

Also, I don't really think you should add more melody, the arpeggio's are more than enough for me here!
otherwise.. lovely atmo!
 

Skip [be] - 8 years ago

a bit moby-like :))

never though about using soundscapes? (backgroundnoises)
might be a fun element to add...
 
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