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MDEMMA - xyllynn

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made a minimal track this time
the xyl in the title is for the xylophone in the head melody
the lynn is my girlfriend, she loves minimal so i made her this for christmas :d
128

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MDeMmA [be] - 8 years ago

any tips on mastering?? :d
 

SlixX [be] - 8 years ago

downed it, will listen on my headphone later, got a poker tournament now :p 128 bpm? i love 124 for minimal, bpm's in minimal is very fragile in my opinion, one bpm can make all the difference.. maybe try on 122 & 124 too? just a suggestion, laterz friend
 

MDeMmA [be] - 8 years ago

neeeh :d 128 is minimal enough dont want people to fall alseep
 

SlixX [be] - 8 years ago

ok just listened, structure & all that is good, only the bass does'nt fit the minimal label i think (imo) also not enough tone variation in the bass, which is very important in minimal (the sub i mean, not just the kick) the echo's are sweet, also, sounds a bit hollow maybe more reverb? or a little reverb on beat and/or master. anywayz the overal style is good, just some minor improvements are needed, like more samples that only come once every 32 or 64 beats or so.. really has that minimal sound in the beat (also has a little house influences if i'm not mistaken, guess this wasn't intentional)
hope these suggestions can help you my friend ;) laterz
 

SlixX [be] - 8 years ago

ja buh kwee nie, vr mj werkt die snelheidbt, mja ligt eraan wa v minimal ge wilt natuurlijk,kbedoel zo a la jesse somefay (small pebbled forest bv), zalig is da, minimal da k het liefst luister, zo ver weg van maximal stijl als ma kan ^^
 

Omyiga [be] - 8 years ago

nice track
Mastering sounds good to me ze
(but I'm not really an expert on that ;p)
Idd maybe a little bit more subtle changes like slixx said or one extra synth towards the end (but that's because I like not extremely minimalistic-james holden style)
alleszins thumb up
 

baart [be] - 8 years ago

haha :D
great!
 

SlixX [be] - 8 years ago

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Gerrick [be] - 8 years ago

hey man.
Cool minimal, just for constructive comments.
Experiment with your percs and clicks and glitches.
The bassline is a bit to low.
Use a subbass or st.
Like the subtile melodie.
Maybe use here and there a counter melodie.
just 2 notes going up and then one going down again after eachother, you know what I mean..
Some pads with effect always do the trick to.
Aight overall this a good minimal track you've made.
I can't keep them so subtile en clean myselve :)
good job
 

SlixX [be] - 8 years ago

that was a useful comment.... this one isnt ^^:)
 

Gerrick [be] - 8 years ago

and yeah 127 -128 bpm is my favo bpm for minimal -techouse tracks so you're good with that ;)
 

IskaRiot [be] - 8 years ago

hehe, didn't expect this from you :p
not my thing, but it sounds pretty minimal to me. ma boost the xylophone a bit, some eq'ing, think there are abit to much low in there. pushing it a bit back.
just a minor thing i noticed. pour la reste, dik in orde he vent, khoop dat het meisje blij was ;)
cheers
 

MDeMmA [be] - 8 years ago

yes yes iskariot i will eq this track , it already has bbeen mastered a little but this version is the unmastered one, and gerrick about the pad i have tried several pads but they disturbed the "wazige" sfeer of the song, i wanted to create something to sit down with an d just float along :) thanx foàr the suggestions guys
 

MDeMmA [be] - 8 years ago

i also made it it intentionally slow upcoming, doenst really happen much in, just because i love that "float along" atmo in it kept it as minimal as possible but still danceable if you would be very drunk :d
the bassline is maybe a bit too low, but that is yet again intentionally to get it "deeper" i wanted to create a good atmosphere not necessarily make a splendidd song
 

MDeMmA [be] - 8 years ago

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AnnoM [be] - 8 years ago

kick needs to be compressed more. bass and kick are dist each other, use sidechaining. some of your perc is nice, but too repetitive. xylophone creates a nice effect, but it should be more melodic. reminds me of akira. again, your bass should be sidechained. more perc afwisseling is needed. track is now 8min, destillate a song of 4min out of it.
 

MDeMmA [be] - 8 years ago

what is sidechaining? :d
 

Leftchest [be] - 8 years ago

pretty cool
:)
 

MDeMmA [be] - 8 years ago

thanx :) now who can tell me what sidechaining is :d
 

Anonymous [be] - 7 years ago

nice!
 
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