Electrobel

excellent!

nice! cool distortion and choatic :D
I like!

verry clear sound and wowli splatterly fat breakz, a real ravefloor fillah, melody is kool aswel, only minor imho is ur patiente ;)...keep workin, ull hit the spot vrry soon...

flow is echt wel vet, kdown het even, vr de easyness of future listeningz

nice one !! I like the amens!

danke danke, the pleasure is all mine ^^

great track!

Hi mate,
, whaa fuck it int nederlands.
en wa denkt te van u examens??
enjoy your holydays,
about the song . sounds expressive en its cool concept. geluiden zijn cool ma ni zo gemasterd ma wat the fuck maakt het uit :d not so fast this time but like said before theeft een ravevloer gehalte
ier zie nog in duim in u reet
peaz bro

yeah nice flow and verry ravey....maybee add another break somewhere to give it some kind of a break....and than a big drop and tsjakka...cool track...keep up

tette

a bit more shuffeling in breaks would bring the needed variation (so use different breaks & shuffle between them)

some synths you throw in are realy unsubtile, try to make shizle more fluent using effects (filters etc etc)

keep the works comin

cheers
COF

@ mr monkey & cruize: you're def right about using different breaks, thought about it, but i must have forgot. i'm allso thinking about more detail in the breaks themself, more chaotic patterns while nearing the outro or something.

as akwalek said, i'm too impatiente, i was so excited making a song in a couple of days instead of the normal weeks i couldn't help myself, i had to share it with you guys ;)

@ aceton: jup idd, i skiped the part where i should master the synths, also my impatience at work...

these comments make me happy :))

I like the ambient sounds at the end
sfeervol+goeie breaks= cool
some really cool parts;
I enjoyed

breakcore/jungle it is, and i like it.
fat noizysynth and i really like the melo versus beat switch in it. thumb up

you nutcase you, hard schijt... sommige synthese zijn nie zo goe imo, carry on ^^

keer wa "contructive comments" smijten he ;-)

eerste melo zou ik eruit laten: die eerste versie die ge doorstuurde klonk veel krachtiger en deze versie heeft da verloren door die melo, mss zo nen corey tailor scream gelijk in de mambo zout veel beter doen dan diene melo. die laatste melo is goe, idd zowa black metal ambient achtig, da werkt dan weer wel. nu nog es de middenste melo herbeluisteren he...ja die hoge die er int begin inkomt (diene reece of toch dienen die op de reece lijkt) behouden, en die ietwat silly klinkende mss ook weglaten (die da samengaat met enkel de hc kick). tgeen is denk ik dat de snelheid van uw amens serieus gedempt wordt door de melos die gelijk maar de helft zo snel gaan (bvb 180 bpm/90 bpm, of alst ni gedeeld door twee is wel gedeeld door vier of acht of weet ik veel). kzout gewoon nog es herbekijken, wa herbeluisteren en zelf zien wa het best klinkt, paar versies maken en es zien waar ge zelf het contentst mee zijt. ge hebt sowieso al 70 procent, gewoon nog tikkeltje aanpassen en de moed ni opgeven. enfin, khoop dat de info wa nuttig was hehe. alvast thumb up!

thanks mate, working on it, but i'm keeping the funny melo, best part of the song imo :p

yeah first melo sucks, just used it 'cause i thouht it sounded like a guitar with way to much phaser or flanger or wathev'
i'm fooling arround with the "reece", different fx and such,...

achja we zien wel zeker, mijn kop staat er ff nie naar :p

ma merci voor de comment, tes een schuuntje, nuttig it was ;)

ela, great stuff man! good overall improvement here, nice melo's good breaks, mix at sometimes harsh but hey we forgive you ;) the first melodic part wasn't my cup of tea though, i think the other ones in the song are from a better level, blijve geven é!

thanks dude, yeah i don't mind sloppy mixes, esp not in breakcore...

a new version is on the way, changed intro, more metaaaaaal, more variations, more of dittum en dattum, more lawijt... really partyparty imo, but it'll have to wait 'till friday-saturday, since i'll be spending these stormy days at seashore without internetconnection ^^

cya then ;)

ignore ^, edit online :)

kvinnet al vetter, sowieso, intro is mss zelfs ni mr nodig, ma ik vind da er nog ewa teveel geloopt word, u bieten zijn cool, u melo ook, ma een beeke teveel geloopt, mss een extra variatie erover spelen ofzo, met een nieuw intstru...ge zijt er bijna ;)also: try rewiring into cubase ofzo, vr total flash fx und masterink, u melo opt einde is echt wel vet

you crazy coreslut.
no serious edit is great nice loops nice metalstuk in begin.
vette kicks breaks etc.
keep it up
jeplaaa

thanks mates
akwa: you're right, i feel the same way, i've been prutsing at it eversince i posted the edit, not starting anything new. kinda struggling with it, but i got time ^^

Great breakcore!! nice playing with the delay on the breaks in the beginning!.. really like it!!
keep it up!

grts

dikke plaat en gaaan

danke danke, havin' a producersblock right now it seems, hopefully i'll return with more enjoyable tracks soon :)

BRUTE!!!! (brutal)

do you play those guitar riffs yourself?

massive!

i lieked iet...

massive!! +fav

i remember this one , but i didn't fucking comment? shame on me !
great track ! nice breakz , guitar is cool