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Djinn - Grippa mexico

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The song is not finished yet, but I share it so you can give me advices and make comments that could be helpfull for me, if you have any suggestions, ideas or other, I'm listening ,)

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transynth [be] - 8 years ago

Quite a cool start, i would pull up the high freqs of the drums..i guess a fat snare would work better rather then the clap you used as well :) .. Nice padwork and melodies, the bassline sounds a litlle too plastic to my taste..Anyway nice ideas and thumbup
 

grim [be] - 8 years ago

nice tension build up! really like that, but i think its to long untill the climax...
no commnents on the sounds, i just like them... and i have to agree with transynth on the bass... to me it sounds a little to dry...
nice track, i think it has some cool ideas... :)
 

Djinn [be] - 8 years ago

Ok guys, thanks for having listened and for your advices, some just confirm what I thought, especially for the bass, I still have to work on... For the snare, I didn't thougt to but it's a good idea, I think I'll try that ;)
and also, about the comment grim made on the length before the climax start, I'll change this moment for a more powerfull arise ;)

Anyway, big thanks for your comments guys !!
 

Brom [be] - 8 years ago

yep nmanneke nice track :-) nice progression and very nice melodies...
donno about organ after the climax but it's a matter of taste of course...
nice track anyway
cheerz
 

SEXTOY [be] - 8 years ago

Dunno why you asked my opinion about your new track, it's really not my type..

Only thing I say, you should put a "preview" of the fat basseline early in the track, with a very low cut, on the background. Untill 2 minuts, I wasn't expecting that exploding sound.

Mais be you could add some stereo enhancer to make the bass more "large" (for me it sounds in front of my ears, not on each side).

By the way, it's neat, proper and diversify, nice done even if it's not my usual shit.
 

Djinn [be] - 8 years ago

thanks to Brom and sextoy, good idea the stereo enhancer, I'll try that on the bass, and Very good idea to put a preview earlier in the track, I'll do that to ;)

actually I asked a few persons I thought they was "able" (no self-effacting in that) to comment the track, either by their taste of music, or by their control of mastering, etc.

anyway, thanks ;)
 

Funky [be] - 8 years ago

I like it, some very nice chordsprogressions & buildup/arrangment pieces... The part with the organ does have a nice vibe to it imo... I think the mix isn't a 100% yet, can't exactly point out what's missing, but you'll get there... ANyhow, thumbup! And good luck with the finishing! grts
 

ShiZen [be] - 8 years ago

i like te fat syth sounth sound towards the end, but there's like a delay on the open hihat or a fade in or maybe it's just that you emphasise the 2nd 16th too much. thats working against the drive of the track. or maybe you use too much swing on it. try to make it shorter some of the times you play it in the groove (fr example in the first and third 'fourths') and the rythm tighter.
 

Djinn [be] - 8 years ago

Thanks for your comment funky, I will finish it one day I hope :P

@Shizen : I didn't think the hi hat was too long, but I'll check that, maybe you're right, I'll try to make it shorter ;)
anyway, thanks for advices guys !
 

omihoshbin [be] - 8 years ago

hay, nice sound quality.
i would change that reconisable "fade in/rise" fruity sample.
great bass sound, good sample usage.
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Powercell [be] - 8 years ago

I like it! Nice i discovered you, i saw on your profile style "rap", so i didn't check out your songs before, but i'm glad i did now! good work man!
 

Djinn [be] - 8 years ago

thanks omihoshbin, I'll think to that ;)

@Powercell :
Thanks for your comment man. Yes, when I registered on Ebel, I made rap instrumentals. But I don't listen to this music and I don't make Instrus anymore, so, I'm gonna change those false informations about me :D
 

CriticalNoise [be] - 8 years ago

massive one dude. bassline is f***ing awesome. sounds finished imo but need to listen the complete tune. nice work bro thumbup
 

Djinn [be] - 8 years ago

thanks man !!
 

Anonymous [be] - 8 years ago

this is club, no electro!!!!!!!!!!
how come people like you and up on this page?
 

Djinn [be] - 8 years ago

How could I ?? you're right man, this is an offense, I committed a crime, I deserve to be hanged right now !!
 

Anonymous [be] - 8 years ago

what's the song inside this song?
 

Djinn [be] - 8 years ago

SOrry, I didn't understand the question ? What do you mean the song inside the song ?
 

QuizoDisco [be] - 8 years ago

I mean the 70's guitar riff... did you make that? it is cool!
 

Djinn [be] - 8 years ago

haha aah ok, yes I played the guitar but I don't like the result, I'll try to record it again and maybe change the melody too ! But thnks anyway ;)
 

Anonymous [be] - 7 years ago

Add some compression to the bass - extend him with some sustain ?
 
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