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kameleon - Attract / Reject

Description

a love song.. :) and a mix between pop & dnb
please let me know what can be improved, thanks

-- K

Lyrics:
I feel you,
Your eyes staring from behind.
I know you,
Your type, playing with my mind.

PreChorus:
One more time, I don’t think so
One more time messed up, I don’t think so
Once again, I have to hold back
Once again, passion, I have to hold back

Chorus:
I hold back, Don’t let anybody near me
I want to forget never relive
I push you back, Sorry but I can’t
Before I engage, I want to revive
I feel you,
Getting closer to my heart.
When you leave,
I am letting down my guard.

PreChorus
Chorus
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Powercell [be] - 8 years ago

i like it! the chorus should be a bit more clear according to myself ;)

grtz, clash
 

transynth [be] - 8 years ago

Your own voice? It sounds quite good..soundwise it could improve, but it's allright..Nice vocals in particular.Grtz
 

kameleon [be] - 8 years ago

hi transynth,

soundwise, tell me more, so I/we can learn and improve the production

thanks
 

omihoshbin [be] - 8 years ago

I like it, quite fresh here on ebel.
It has some good ideas in it, good build op, nice parts and a great break towards the end.
Yeah, the mix down, i dunno, some sounds need to be equalised more, a bit more sparkle. the bass is good, nicely wide but not to much, overall very good. keep up
 

kameleon [be] - 8 years ago

hi, thanks,
ok i'll work on eq'ing some more and maybe using some better samples.. thanks fr the input
 

0NightShade0 [be] - 8 years ago

nice song, the part i prefer is the dark part from 1.52 to 2.04
 

Gloomer [be] - 8 years ago

very nice song indeed, great vocals. Thx for your comments too ;-)
 

ZoOlR [be] - 8 years ago

cool cool !
 

HyeVolture [be] - 8 years ago

a female trent reznor. sounds like nine inch nails mixed with garbage or something, cool to hear this on electrobel. nice song.
 

AchtungVolk [be] - 8 years ago

Sounds good! The atmosphere is perfect! The chorus maybe needs more punch (turn on the distortion, boost your sound so you can really get close trent reznor's kinda music) . Anyway, everything is well done.
 
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