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particle - sailing off islands with my improvised boat

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must make more music waargh
working on looots of different tracks at a time, so i kind of avoid going deep
result not very balanced
at the other hand i'm getting towards something, just need some more time, mmmh
track begins smoothly , but transitions pretty unsmoothly in something experimental melodic .. can't say what really, don't know what to think
what do you think?


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Skip [be] - 7 years ago

enjoyed it,
perhaps too Cyan sun like, Im verry much looking forward to more experimental stuff from you son.
Perhaps have some restrictions beforehand in order to achieve a perhaps,if you will, more original/intersting track.
I would just go much more extremeness in a way,or in an element of music (if that is of some appealment to you fcourse mate) OIm saing this partially because its what Im aiming for atm.

peace and catch u later homey

 

particle [be] - 7 years ago

couldn't follow you for a while but the wall made it all clear ;)
i agree with you, this is one of my typical, -takelotsofthisandthatheysoupisready- track, i tend to go very automatic once composing and start to forget the rest
but i think this will get better and better in the upcoming stuff :)
 

Skip [be] - 7 years ago

love your tracktitle mate!

hope Im not too bossy."do this! do that!" :))
 

particle [be] - 7 years ago

hehe no no , not at all, just the kind of feedback i need here ; i've got the sound for a while now, craftsmanship is next ;)
 

Akwalek [be] - 7 years ago

maybe give urself a goal, a kaderken where u can work in or towards.
An album and/or a label where you would want to release a (philosofical?) concept.
want u muze staat er zenne, joyfully being sad
 

Omyiga [be] - 7 years ago

haja nu snapk waarover da gulder bezig waart :p
hmja..me mijne rustigen omyiga hadk ook na een tijdje zo dazelfde "probleem' dak zonder dak et goe besefte weer int zelfde stramien aant werken was (gelijk da ge zegt 'go automatic').
About the song: schoontje, zeker ni slecht ma idd ni zo verassend als sommige oudere nummers van u. Mss ligt da idd aan de intesiteit van emotie/energy derin (zware woorden iere :p)
 

StProost [be] - 7 years ago

synth @ 2:00 rocks! Nice song.
 

CruizeOfFiction [be] - 7 years ago

another great song^^

that synth that drops in around 2 is very cool indeed, but for me maybe a tad too loud and a tad too eclectic (notes whise)

duimpjes en kusjes!

more more more more!
 

ZoOlR [be] - 7 years ago

love the synth that comes at 2min
the track is delicious, very peaceful... looking forward to the edit
 

Jelle [be] - 7 years ago

dixit akwalek: joyfully being sad. ie: NICE.

Great song, great atmo, I don't agree about it being less original. I really really (really) like the first part. I'm less keen on the sounds in the second part, but that'll be taste.

I think you'll have to let go in making music. You're always saying waargh need to make more music or waaargh did not finish this 'n that tit tat. You cannot hurry inspiration eh ;-)
 

eckhart [be] - 7 years ago

really like the first part a lot, after around 1.55 it becomes less my thing... too much (dissonant) notes for me i guess :)

i'd keep the first part and work it out as a chilling ambient-idm tune :)
 

particle [be] - 7 years ago

allright, everything is noted :)
thanks! eurm actually i don't know if i will finish this one off, got some other stuff i'll be continueing on but all advice is very appreciated and will be taken into further account! ;)
 

HyeVolture [be] - 7 years ago

I agree with the comments above. I also know the feeling of making a hundred tracks and never finish one, really frustrating, especially when you have something that feels ok but doesn't get finished. in fact: I guess it's a common thing among people who make music with computerprogs: you have to do it all by yourself, so it's a very intense process. but you know all that. already a thumbken and post some more music ;)
 

IskaRiot [be] - 7 years ago

mmmmm, yes! like the harmonies, like the melodies, like the atmo, beats are maybe a bit to minimal voor mijn uufd ma ze passen er very schoontjes onder! downloaden si
 

omihoshbin [be] - 7 years ago

very deep sound, love the basses.
great melodies playing thru eachother.
thumb!
 

Tomastar [be] - 7 years ago

Nice progression and this synth is great!
Peacefull and aerie good job
+dl
 

Tjahzi [be] - 7 years ago

nice! this one's really coherent, i in contrast to stasis (just listened to that one 2 ) really soft & mellow. i like how the deep basses & the beat carry you away while the little melodic details give the finishing touch. + fav!
 
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