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particle - stasis

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heyhey
stasis, kinda where my track has gone too because it's not really finished, i like it a lot but just don't seem to get the beat fixed , argl
anyways, hope u like all the rest beside the silly beat

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Jelle [be] - 7 years ago

Boeloeboebiebabediebabedie

Things really start flowing well from around 1minute.

I really like the highest synth with the quick melo's and the sound of the bass near the end when it gets faster enal.

beatwise en structurewise could indeedidly be improved a bit.

cheerio


 

Phye [be] - 7 years ago

ooh bleeeeeps! been a while since ive heard something from you! very good swong!
 

Skip [be] - 7 years ago

hey sunny boy howz'it hangin
zot love the mood

what I would try here is to work on the beats without hearing any synths in order to focus on the beats(dont actually delete any melo's ).
It would push you to a next level if the beatwork would be as playfull as the melowz...
Idd say go for it
Maybe add more divercity in percussion sounds
(ik ken da zenne,beats op 2e plaats die te weinig aandacht krijgen,alé vroeger toch)
greeten
 

Tjahzi [be] - 7 years ago

i think it's a bit chaotic and it lacks some structure, the overall sound quality is nice comme toujours!

just try working on some more structural build up and stuffy (:
 

particle [be] - 7 years ago

heyhey thanks all, i don't know , qua structure i like it, maybe there's here and there some melo's that are not really perfect yet mr how allezja i like em , i think it's really the beatwork that gives this overall clumsyness
anyways thanks for listening, more is up as usual, maybe just a tad slower
 

JackSoundStack [be] - 7 years ago

nice stuff
 

mist [be] - 7 years ago

sweet, that tune deserves to be finished :)
try to add some other rhythmic elements (doesnt have to be drums) and play with them like you played with the melody. easier said than done, yes.
or otherwise ask someone to do a remix :)
 

particle [be] - 7 years ago

thanks =)
ur kinda right, i was pretty happy to the max with this track untill i put it here and kinda pushed it in my endless bag of-i will do that later once

that bag is evil
we'll see i guess :p
 

Rabauw [be] - 7 years ago

Yeah nice track and very neatly produced, however the last 20 seconds sadly turn it into a failed imitation of Mario Bros :-(
I would go back and revise that part, other than that good work!
 

particle [be] - 7 years ago

haha mario bros, didn't see that one coming:p but yea yer right,i always felt like that part was er te veel aan en al
 
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