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Carbura - Lonely Mexican

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Something is missing... I'll let it rest 4 awhile. Let me know how you think I could finish it.

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reaman [be] - 12 years ago

Hi, I'll try to be constructive and say what I would do with the song:
First impression: very nice but a little too polite. It lacks punch and I'd do it with a very drastic change around 3' + the addition off another instrument in the first 3'. At around 3' I'd create a "stop" and the swell of another melody/rythm/instrument.
I think the string are sometimes a little too idle, too high, so they loose credibility.
So shorten it up or create a second part.
Hope I helped you a little.
 

cestqui [be] - 12 years ago

thehheh,you have to learn youre genres
this is no downbeat,just house

although it isn't that bad ,just loose the piano,it needs a deep piano melo with a high string,to end up cool,nice you get my drift,i'll stop listening now,cause my dog freaks out>>best moni's around

catch ya lataz
 
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