Electrobel

Cool song, but some variation in the drumpattern couldn't hurt... add some cymbals, breaks, doublehits...

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I do also like most of your other stuff!

I like the athmosphere but it's a pity one has to wait threethirty before the song gets some punch. Good instrumentalisation. The rythm in the beginning falls in a litle too late i guess. Overall it makes me think of depeche mode and pink floyd.

we're still working on the song, fx on the voice are not ok. The lyrics must be rewritten etc....
But your comments are helping us.

That voice is very nice! Very warm nice fx! Nice guita (i think).. This is how electropop should be, i like it! (Though have no clue waht he's singing, it doesn't bother me)

Very cooooooool !

Very nice tune.
Only a few suggestions though: that you use a soft rimshot instead of a snare. Or put the snare volume a lot lower. Maybe add some crispness to the drums, to give it more of a triphop approach maybe?

Around 3:10 I expected it to break fully loose, but there might be an electric guitar missing, or some deep down-tuned orchestrations. Track lacks some punch there. I think it could be so much better when trying to work towards a climax.

Rabauw,
thnx for the comments, but the music was made by my Spanish friend Modesto and he send me the track in wav, so i couldn't change a bit, now it's a while ago and i'm working hard on new things but, i'd like to finish this song, also with written lyrics because those are just words right out of my boots.... lol

Nice, but this track needs some more variation in the beginning indeed, the second part is better. And I should add a dubby distinct basspattern.