Electrobel

'till 1' it's a splendid track, but then u start to combine several chaos elements (textures), which aren't balanced as it should be, in order to keep me on the right part of the edge... This track has lot's of potential though; you should try to minimise the sound and yet keep the feeling maximized. greetz

very nice track, but ;-)

-too long (this is not a 9 minute track)

-don't overdo the rythm changes (yes, they are cool, but a track is more than showing what you can do...)

- really like the pad/synth

- really like the bassline

- vocoded voice is good.. but overdone (same comment as above.. a track is more than tricks)


rethink the concept (structure) and I think you got something to put on vinyl


grtz,
edd

indeed it's right what edd says; i find the original better. the bassline of the original is much smoother, sexyer!! and i love also the play with the hihats, which dissapeared in your remix...

Sun, open air dance floor, girls... Fun! Just a thing maybe : the sequence on the left channel coming after a minute or so, try to divide the lenght of the notes by two and to dubble those notes. It will give a dynamic impulse. But it's maybe just a question of taste... ;-) Keep on the good work!