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NeonSoul - Pink Planet

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This is the first track I ever made...hope you guys won't shoot me down thinking this sucks big time :-)
Any comments are welcome seeing I'm totaly new...ENJOY!!!

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Doorchaser [be] - 12 years ago

Well it doesn't suck Big Time. It doesn't suck at all. For a first attempt i find this very impressive. Nice Groove. Love the Bass sound! Love the synths.

Two little notes. Try to put a little more variation in it (melodywise) (I'm a sucker for songstructures (but maybe that's just me)). Second. I think the rhytm part should be just a little bit louder.

Anyway big thumbs up!!
 

NeonSoul [be] - 12 years ago

Thanks Doorchaser!! I'll keep that in mind!
 

Doorchaser [be] - 12 years ago

It stays good!! Good for a little fun at work!!
 

Doorchaser [be] - 12 years ago

Hell yeah added to the favs!! The More I listen the better it gets!
 

Anonymous [be] - 12 years ago

Hi, it's not bad for your first track but it should be more complete, use for instance hihats, lead sounds etc and other stuff to make it more interesting.
 

Anonymous [be] - 12 years ago

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IsSeN [be] - 12 years ago

special trance... not the kind i thought it would be :)

my commentz while listening.

1) bass needs more FX, it's standard not deep enough
2) for your first track: real nice
3) drums are very simple 2
4) synths, not real deep but not bad for a easy track like this one
5) bass is to simple and start to irritating me after a while
6) it's always the same, it needs more variation
7) ur LFO of the synth sucks 2. he's fitlering your synth and then hup you start again while ur lfo wasn't finished yet.
8) i'm still waiting for something else, a melodie a fill, a pad, a fx, but nothing ... still the same

maybe a song for during an opening screen from some video game :)
 

NeonSoul [be] - 12 years ago

Thanks alot for the comment IsSen..really appreciate any feedback I get!
 

intertec [be] - 11 years ago

i expected much worse ! this ain't so bad, actually i like this track, it's ambient trance and u used some nice sounds !
 
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