Electrobel

I personally don't like the synth sound that much, the one that you begin with...& some other synth sounds tend to trancy stuff, which I like less...Rest is a good basis to build some more on imho...Grtz

i hate that intro sound,that bell

and what was that bazzpound,1sec of overpowering bass somewhere in the intro,are u trying to kill my speakers,lol

if ya dont think the bell in the song,its like a madonna -like shake song,lol,or cindy lauper;throw some voice in it,and u have a radio hit,for jan en alleman

good sound,but a now where going ,structure up and down,and up and....you lost me

greetz

the bazeline is pretty deep & cool, but it is totally wrong what you did with it from 3.33 till 4.20. that arpeggio just doens't fit in this genre of music, idem for the synths that come in @ 4.20 to trance, while this track is some disco-house (as heard from ivan smagghe on i love techno last year). the long bell-sound is idd disturbing. delete it, and replace it by some mid-range stuttering sounds, that are panning and being effected in function of you melody. also a cutted voice could do the track some good. and just keep the bassline-melody the same, but play with it's sound between 3.30 and 4.20. after 4.20, don't add such cheesy trancy-sounds, but some extra stuttering "destroying" sounds, with a warm tube-saturation in it..yeah!! this song could be a bomb!
this is my vision of how this track should be, i hope it is kind of help to you ;)