Electrobel

nice going,but in my opinion,the 2nd guitar riff is too much,on top of the other,i would sugest a distorted lead guitar,that way you can tell the story of this,as it schould be;

cause now its very monotone(dreamy),wich is contradictive to the punchy kicker;

nice and nicer elements,and somehow not suiting the mood(kick)elements;

anyways,lots of potential,greetz

Really nice idea to it....Good main melo...Could have more elements on top imho.... And ofcourse a voice...Chill song! Good work!

thanks for the feedback.
a voice would be so nice. i sadly don't have that potential myself so if anyone could give me a name of someone (preferably female)....

minimal and well done... it's ok for me, I've a guitare too but don't use it enough so good motivation for me ! The melody seems to be well know, is it our own composition?