Electrobel

the song has some potential but imo not all the sounds fit well together Overal i like the idea but it needs more work Keep it up

You have to make it sound more as a whole...a bit reverb/delay on your lead synths wouldn't do any harm either. Really like your high strings + background sounds. Not bad mate!
Grtz.

I still have to learn lots and lots !!!
But these tips are really useful ... thx !!

I still think I don' t "dare" enough to use certain effencts ..
Also I 'm not really comfortable with compressors, limiters ... could using that (over the master) also help ??

I someone could comment on the stereofield of this song, that's welcome as well, since my right ear is impaired (- 70dB at 4000 hz :-(

keep the intro melody 3 bars longer
keep it misterious then and build it up slowly to a top point

bassdrum is ok
strings mayby a bit louder
percusions a bit down
for the rest a nice take on !

good parts,I'd keep the part with the bassline a bit longer and make it a bit darker from there...