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yenneman - Malignant Mesothelioma

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Hi guys (and girls of course!)

Another day, a new genre...a first time for everything...

Ever saw that movie in which a person was shrunk until he was so small he could travel through the human body? Well, that's what we do now, we'll make a short trip through the lungs of a person with a dangerous lung disease...we hear his pain, and see his lungs die very slowly...

I'd like some comments on this first attempt. Greetings and thx!

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dropthedyle [be] - 11 years ago

i like that soundscape. maybe suspend the pulsation before the end or here and there to let the atmo breath?
 

Rabauw [be] - 11 years ago

Seems you have lots of inspiration these days ;).

I like the "breathing", ain't so easy to make.

I find those little fx that start after 2:10 rather distracting from the whole.

I don't think the breathing should last throughout its entire length. The bells and synths were nice, very dark and sad.

Not bad for a first ambient track.
 

FabioPersonale [be] - 11 years ago

Nice first attempt Great atmosphere you create
 

heatfuse [be] - 11 years ago

good start for a first try in another genre. I feel the percussions can be improved upon. track also has a little laurent garnier flavour to it with the dark synths and small fx-sounths, which is pretty cool.
 

edith [be] - 11 years ago

this could be the intro to a great track. gets my inspiration going. good sound, but a bit too short ?
 

Bedlam [be] - 11 years ago

not bad !
 

Akwalek [be] - 11 years ago

indeed verry laurent garnier, cool attempt...verry relaxin ambient groove...
 

Distreality [be] - 11 years ago

great great great !!!

love it...

+fav right away...
 

Distreality [be] - 11 years ago

very cool, but way too short !!
thumbs up
 

Krael [be] - 10 years ago

Nice, nice, nice, great atmosphere. thumbs up, grtz
 

BpOlar [be] - 10 years ago

a bit morbid ...but nice evoking sounds
 
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