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Bedlam - Depressed

Description

this song talks about loneliness, depression, suicide, being trapped inside yourself and thinking you can't escape...

I have to say I hesitated alot before uploading this one...
First of all, because it does not fully fit in this site, even though the instrumental would, but some people do post sung songs so I finally decided to.
I am deeply attached to this song, so please if you vote NO, with all do respect, please leave a comment...

Enjoy,

v3: last version, should be no off tunes, no volume problems, this is really the best i can do without proffessional help !
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" Help me through the night,
Let me sleep so peacefully,
As I close my eyes,
I try to forget my misery...

And the face of death,
Stays inside my head,
Can you hold my hand,
Through another night...

I need your help right now,
I'm about to break apart,
Walls are closing in on me,
And i can't seem to get out...

Please don't let me go,
I'm afraid of what's ahead,
I feel so alone,
And i'm so depressed..."

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reaman [be] - 8 years ago

man , this song is much better than you describe it.

your voice isn't that off-tune as you think and fits the song wonderfully.

I truly liked it!!!
 

Rabauw [be] - 8 years ago

Holy Sesame! This is AWESOME man!
Like Reaman said, the voice is quite good, just when you try to hold a note there's some vibrato in it, but it has its charm :). Like you said, you are venting emotions.

Pronunciation is pretty good, which, for me as a linguist by education, is always important.

As for the music: it's very "ballad-like", starting off with the piano, then evolving deeper and deeper towards a climax with the guitar solos, all good.

As for a negative comment, the piano solo at the beginning is soooo cliché dude, I mean not in general, but for a ballad that is.
Another thing: the "dirty" guitar sounds too dirty in fact, I don't mind some contrast to the sound picture, but here you could clean up the guitar.

But my man, you really are underestimating your vocal capacities, not so bad as you think, not at all. In fact, at certain points, your voice sounds akin to the singer in Anathema.

I would claim this is one of the best songs I have heard on Ebel in a while, damn, fell in love with it right away. I even managed to sing along from the very first listen, once accustomed to the vocal melody. :)

A deeply emotional piece, and it seems you and I think alike on certain aspects of life. If I look at your lyrics, damn, they take me back right away to some years ago, when I was going through a hard period, and would think like that nearly everyday...so, the song really speaks to me and affects my inner state.

Definitely the best I've heard from you so far. Keep at this level, pal. This one goes straight into my favs!
 

Bedlam [be] - 8 years ago

Very touching comments...

I am going to do a few changes in some loops that get kinda boring at some part and adjust some volumes and probably resing some verses
 

heatfuse [be] - 8 years ago

here is my advice: next time don't hesitate to upload stuff like this...just DO IT. enjoyed it, only the reverb on the voice sounded a bit out of place.
 

Salamadictus [be] - 8 years ago

Whow!
I didn't suspect this to be so good when I was reading your description, but after listening your song i'm quite amazed!
I agree with rabauw about the piano intro, it's a little bit cliché indeed but after that there's one very nice song. Your singing capacity is really good and I like the little details like the flute:)
Concerning the lyrics: Superb, very recognisable the way you describe it is really beautiful.
Really nice work man!:)
 

Despoilah [be] - 8 years ago

Dude really don't make me feel like that ! it hurts when I feel like crying !
Seriously a nice song nice singing and nice EVERYTHING man
 

Rabauw [be] - 8 years ago

Hmmm...I think I prefer the first version... I have the impression this 2nd version isn't so "deep" as the first one? Maybe because of the remixing of the levels?

Could it be you've lowered the volumes of the background violins/cellos? If i remember it correctly, the first version was "deeper"...emotions not only through the vocals but also through the mix? Or am I mistaking?
 

Bedlam [be] - 8 years ago

Actually the strings went up but most of the other stuff was boosted too and the vocals now are a bit too high I have to change that... i should bave the vocals more into the music :)

Maybe the emotions, there is less melody mixes than the first one, this one is more sequenced, maybe i'll go back to more melancolic mixed melodies like before...
 

aphone [be] - 8 years ago

man,im just wakin up and wooow this vibe is awsome, very good,it sounds ready for a comercial use. Well done !! Thumbs up
 

orfeo [be] - 8 years ago

magnifique.Good voice.Fais avec coeur c' est sur.Thumb up
 

liquidbass [be] - 8 years ago

for me this song does fit to ebel!

This is electronic music... so why not?

For the rest it's very beautiful... but I hope you do also turn positive feelings and energies into music! ;)
 

Bedlam [be] - 8 years ago

If i ever have some, i suppose i will :)
 

musicahead [be] - 8 years ago

very dood!!!
 

brandtkalk [be] - 8 years ago

this song is a soul transformer! hope to see you on stage!
 

edith [be] - 8 years ago

sounds great ! you got a nice singingvoice too :)
 

yenneman [be] - 8 years ago

That's your voice? It's great! Rabauw already mentioned Anathema, well...it immediately reminded me of that group. A very deep, emotional piece you've got here man. Be proud.
 

TheThreatOfDawn [be] - 8 years ago

Indeed, he does sound a little like the guy from Anathema!! Sounds real good here!! the songs got a nice build-up!! thumb up!
 

Bedlam [be] - 8 years ago

i think i will go listen to some Anathema :)

edit: well maybe some analogies, but i guess u can compare my voice better than i can ! it's true at some points i sence some little resemblance... and i'm flattered by your compliments...
 

Blaaspop [be] - 8 years ago

i'm crying ..
 

misstrohan [be] - 8 years ago

a beauty...
 

brandtkalk [be] - 8 years ago

sometime you remember me the spirit of "david sylvian"
nice!
 

SoLo [be] - 8 years ago

just, wonderful, just to respect the felling you talking about and some of ours have felt and i am, you find the just words, not too much, not too shy, and musical part is awesome too, really enjoyed it and understanded that we are so much too feel alone, and here, we are alone together ;)
 

brandtkalk [be] - 8 years ago

so beautifull! pas envie de critiquer juste envie d'écouter!
;)
 

Bedlam [be] - 8 years ago

merci :)
 

rule001 [be] - 8 years ago

sweet!!!
(take it from a guy who has serious experiences with depression...and bedlam... well..u obviously know what i mean)

its just totally great!!
the only thing i would maybe change is the title to "through another night"...
...but thats just me personall ;)

+fav bigtime
 

Bedlam [be] - 8 years ago

Thank you for your compliments :)
 

WanBushi [be] - 7 years ago

In fact there is no point in commenting this song again. Everything has been said !
but i can't help it, just wanna post my word : great song !
 

Bedlam [be] - 7 years ago

Thank you :)
 

MucH [be] - 7 years ago

Yes this is beautiful

Nice done
 

Anonymous [be] - 7 years ago

this song didnt have very long lyrics and his voice sounded mono tone
 

Anonymous [be] - 7 years ago

oh. my. goddddd....i frickin love it.
 

Rabauw [be] - 7 years ago

still like this one a lot..been a while since I last listened to it, still touches me.
 

Bedlam [be] - 6 years ago

Thnx Rabby :D
 
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