Electrobel

Not bad for a first reason production, but it really "reeks" of Reason. I mean, you've used all these typical reason patches, some of them are so famous/recognizable everyone can instantly tell it's made with reason. (like the Fuller Strings etc...)

If you're gonna continue with Reason, try to make more use of Advanced Reverbs & Scream devices. They allow you to create synths with more depth and which are more diverse than the standard patches. And throw some unison in your mixer :)

Musically it's okay, a bit on the safe side, but not bad to listen to in the morning. I think however I would like it so much more if I'd hear some more of your personal touches to it. Crank up the production, more flavour to the devices, try to have it sound more "you" and less "reason".

nice song Great emo in it. For me it's a crossing of epic and chicago

not so bad !

I dont use reason so i dont really hear it sounding reasonish but it does sound kinda simple, the samples i mean ! but its good for my ears after lunch !

Well, it starts kind of simple, but after 1'30" I really enjoy it, especially at 2'00" when another synth is added. Very melancholic piece...I don't know the reason soundbank, so to me it's fine, it has the typical Psychobass percussion.

kirei to omoimas!

@ Rabauw ... what u say is totally right, but indeed, i made this with the original sound banks ... how do i get other soundbanks?

u see, i'm not that good with reason for the moment, BUT i promise i'll add a little bit more of me the next time, thnx for your comment!

Other soundbanks? No no, what I meant was, the samples and patches you've used often are the standard versions of the sounds.
You can already give it your personal touch by changing the filter, vel parameters, pitch, etc etc... Or by attaching something extra like reverb, scream, vocoder, etc etc.

What I meant was, you've used the standard samples for your song. But if you play with all the knots and features, you can get a whole different and denser sound, even from the same patch.
You can even make a sound from an empty patch.

Just play around a bit, you'll see... Explore, practice, work, twist, turn, think, try...error...try again, voila... :)

agree with Rabauw, but hey, very good start!
for new soundz: use the sampler + there are lotz of 'refillz' exsisting