Electrobel

well, so far it's ok, but you must introduce something new...
I think that after a minute or so, you could add some extra hi-hats, fast and a bit louder than the others, but with a certain decay...
Also a synth line, played low and with some distortion on it, to set the atmosphere...
What could work too are some samples of sledgehammers or other working gear ( drills,...) with some delay on them, here and there, on the beats...
That are things that I try, along with some vocal samples in my tracks...
Like to hear what you think of my stuff too...

sounds good. just a change in the melody could do the trick maybe?.....and some bells or something just for a few high tones in there , hope you continue with it ! cheerios ;)

oh this is very good it only misses an additional melody i have lot's of ideas right now .you have a very strong base and i'm very curious how yer going to finish it.
but there is need of a high point in the song, something that breaks it open.maybe a flute alike synth tone with a bend on the notes you know like one tha connects the notes.

i would complete the bassline you have with some notes of a totally different sounding bass, more moog-ish one, maybe with an lfo on the filter, to add a little more funkyness to the track.
for the end, i think you could just continue the melody after the drums stop to smoothen it.