Electrobel

i like the sound palette a lot but as you said it's very mechanical...

indeed a good soundpallete but a bad balanced mix; beatt gets pushed away by the background sounds, maybe you compressed it a little to much.i advice a more straight forward building up cuz for now this song is going no where in imo.in my point of view i think the ambiance draws to much attention, there is no real red line true the whole.place the beat some more in front and let it be the leading of yer melody and ambiance.now i have the feeling of a long intro to something.greets

this is, for me, a really good intro ( a bit to long) for a breakcore track...you v got the sounds, the ambiance, the intro, and the skillz...:) to continue this...

Edit:heum only know i read icteder comment

thx for coms,
yes this traxx it's very mechanical and a lot of filters, i think break core in first time but is soft

sorry my english is a catastrophe

wow...really digged that ..supa!!!

nice one! man, good job

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one of your better tracks !!

:d thx alot!!

cool one , bien dark et j aime bien la sub basse

tu devrais retravailler les rythmes

yep
dans mes futur essais Idm je vais tenter de trouver une rythmic original