Electrobel

nice bleepy acid, but the 3'd note of your acidloop is dissonant (you can solve it by making the sequence in monophony). for the rest some hihats are needed (i only hear some clicks, but those are not enough). you can also do some fill-up with some reverbed deep vocals (it would suit the picture very well imho).
anywayz nice aciiid!

thanks for the comment, I will try to improve it

Work those knobs more :)

nicetrack. for me the acid line seems bit monotone overall. I like the dissonance it has. makes it bit dirty jackin style.

not bad indeed. Like this kinda acid mucho. Work those knobs more maybe !!! make the acid tweak :)

Only comment I can give is for the monotone nature of the acid line. on the other hand I do like the dissonance, gives that dirty jackin vibe :)

Thanks for the comments