Electrobel

strong music! Vocal sounds a bit pitched though...like that a bit less.. Good compo also! Grtz

Oh my god ! What happened to my song ! Why is it over pitched ???????

Damn man, this is 100 times better, I thought it was supposed to go that fast... :) It fitted, but not on the vocals, so that's why I made that remark...Didn't noticed it was in the bad Khz man..i'm sorry :( grtz

nice one!!! mr Bedlam! just your voice can be put more on up front! i think! :)

Thank you mr Funky !

Thank you mr Brandtkalk !

It is always hard to decide how high the voice should be

dont step over
make more tracks
and step with us

:-)

see the BDTK com..... next one good song mr Bedlam.... :))

another great one mr bedlam!!
+fav

Music keeps me going, Mr LittleOnion !

Thank you papa rf ! I'll check it out !

Thank you rule001 ! always nice to hear from you !

The opening is quite interesting, but in general I don’t really like it. Maybe because it sounds like I’ve heard it all before, I dunno. The whole of it just doesn’t speak to me... It’s just one of those songs that I can’t seem to get into... I listen to the song and I find it a mixture of you and Yenneman’s style, with a touch of Tägtgren’s Pain-project, a combination of which you would expect me to like it a lot but for some reason this one doesn’t do the trick. Just a matter of taste in the end...

As for production, I’d say bring your vox a bit more upfront, and do something about that piano at the end ‘cos boy that’s quite a cheap ending.

Thanks for the comments Rabauwski

I can't expect you to like all my songs right :)

I'm happy about the honest comment, everyone has made the same comment about the vox so i guess its something to ponder upon !

First song I hear from you.
I think there's a lot of hope in your depression! :-)
As an old new wave fan, i like it a lot!
The voice is ok, and that's a big compliment from me 'cause I think it's the most difficult instrument, and the most beautiful of course. There's feeling in your voice, but... Just let it out!! It's too "frenchy". Play more with it and don't be afraid to sing louder! (be a black man! like Catherine Ringer :-)))
++1

Mr Bedlam!
I am catching up on all songs I haven't listened to the past months.
Rabauw's comparison of Pain hits the spot imo...I like it when the song breaks loose (f.e. at 1'00", 1'55" and after 3'44"). Also, lots of variation and a nice build-up.

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wouhouw.. i've got a long way to go!