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particle - there's a light at the end of the roa
Description
Again unfinished business ( smells like massive attack ) had some very very very uninspired weeks lately, almost thought i'd better quit producing in stead of irritating myself behind my screen. Bit of a emotional track ( i'm happy though :D ), maybe too much for some people's, it's a very raw version and needs more work ( and inspiration sheisse ) comments or advices appreciated*edit: added some length, a variation and a part with a piano. I'm doubting a bit about the piano , what do you guys think? ( beats etc don't have much variations now, that's to be changed when the track's finished)
Edit 2 : Finally the final version :D i've followed filmjolk's advice because this song is coming my ears out! And it's a hard job to create some kind of story out of it. I thought if i don't do this this song will never get finished in a lifetime. It still sounds a bit raw, somehow i'm not able to make it sound fluently.. Hope you guys enjoy and i didn't screw it up. Now i can finally get my hands om something else :D
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Comments
SpazzMano [be] - 17 years ago
icteder [be] - 17 years ago
uzumaki [be] - 17 years ago
meutn [be] - 17 years ago
CruizeOfFiction [be] - 17 years ago
kheb verdomme mn zakdoeken moeten bovenhalen. TOO FUCKING EMO FOR ME (emo= emotioneel)
manman, meutn doet het weer. Shit strakke stront sammy (DA EEN ALLITERATIE!!!). Uw beats klinken echt strak, in begin stond ik wat scpetisch: hoe in goedsnaam kunt ge daar beats bijsmijten die erbij horen, but you've done it!
werk em af, en weest fier
tot blaar
meutn [be] - 17 years ago
teebo [be] - 17 years ago
TheThreatOfDawn [be] - 17 years ago
SpazzMano [be] - 17 years ago
SpazzMano [be] - 17 years ago
SpazzMano [be] - 17 years ago
jeroenM [be] - 17 years ago
hosmOz [be] - 17 years ago
HarryPoppins [be] - 17 years ago
stryder [be] - 17 years ago
eeezzeepeezzeee [be] - 17 years ago
first 2scnds; dayvan cowboy?
meutn [be] - 17 years ago
to freezebeeze: nosé de synth lijkt er wel een beetje op achteraf gezien mr was niet de bedoeling ;) ( schitterend nummer trouwens :)) )
RedVade [be] - 17 years ago
Emotion is the lead.. like that..
what a great track, you'r obligated to finish it :)
and ow yeah, talk some more to your self on the wall, its good for my lachspierkes ^^ LOL
thumbs up, grtz
StorungStelle [be] - 17 years ago
HyeVolture [be] - 17 years ago
Greetz,
Q. aka hye
Voxcoder [be] - 17 years ago
adya [be] - 17 years ago
dialekte [be] - 17 years ago
filmjolk [be] - 17 years ago
maybe the beats come to sudden (maybe a fade in) i was surprised when it arrived. i like the piano part. maybe you could make a ABA' song, so after the piano the first part of the song would come again but slightly different.
i am really impressed meutn, it's very very very good!
CruizeOfFiction [be] - 17 years ago
Du machst kranke music, ich liebe das jah.
Supper smäcklich geile feltcher (tip: typ feltcher in op google (afbeeldingen)).
privecomcept1 [be] - 17 years ago
fabethefabulous [be] - 17 years ago
Apaisant MMmmm..... nice track
@+ +
teebo [be] - 17 years ago
pittaman [be] - 17 years ago
The piano gives me a sense of arrival, but I think it can use a bit more energy, it sounds a bit dull as it is now (the piano). And maybe introduce it in the beginning, together with the high sounding synths, and then take it out, and put it back in at the end. Just an idea, since you wanted some feedback on the piano.
jeroenM [be] - 17 years ago
Didn't really hear massive attack in it... they sound way darker
Anonymous [be] - 17 years ago
Sincerely,
Slough Of Dispond
meutn [be] - 17 years ago
@Slough Of Dispond : Alles is gemaakt in reason
DeHomunculus [be] - 17 years ago
stryder [be] - 17 years ago
filmjolk [be] - 17 years ago
well we have the feeling that the song is finished while listening. Maybe the A' is a bit short but i understand that you don't want to spend any more time on the same song :D good work!
meutn [be] - 17 years ago
antares [be] - 17 years ago
Greets
hosmOz [be] - 17 years ago
still a very good track, but not hearting me as the previous version...thumbzz up
greetzz
eeezzeepeezzeee [be] - 17 years ago
only remark here on the piano;It's a nice melodie but you should try and make it more lively, because I can't hear enough emotion through it..
Well done! Greetz
adya [be] - 17 years ago
:)
(respect)
HyeVolture [be] - 17 years ago
Akwalek [be] - 17 years ago
Distreality [be] - 17 years ago
TheThreatOfDawn [be] - 17 years ago
Zool [be] - 17 years ago
The pianopart comes at the right time for variation.
edith [be] - 17 years ago
Gandharva [be] - 17 years ago
now that would be a gay way of saying...
"koosjer!" :p
Skip [be] - 17 years ago
goe gerief!
eckhart [be] - 17 years ago
Doorchaser [be] - 17 years ago
crolerbedo [be] - 17 years ago
Very good sounds, cool beats and nice evolution, if find the story quite fluent in fact...
Just a bit short, the main sensitive part could come back as said before, with slight changes, as an outro...
Bah anyway, very good track m'boy
bitrille [be] - 17 years ago
JabbaAndFollox [be] - 16 years ago
Jeller [be] - 16 years ago
HarryPoppins [be] - 16 years ago