Electrobel

are you the Hyperion from Sunflower?

if no, that is allready a (goa)trance artist!

but the most important thing: nice song

listening meanwhile giving comments;

good start, but try to use less reverb on bass or delay on bass.

the bassline kills also a bit the kick.(1:39)

u used the peak controller i suppose, try to use it more pushing, giving a deeper drive.

2:34 suddenly cutoff of the hihats, sounds a bit weird

in your break, maybe remove the peak controller, in that sphere no need to create the 'drive effect'

building up with toms is nice, put them a bit harder maybe

4:57 remove maybe the hats, sounding weird, and time they fall in is bit weird

else, good climax, can be nice with adding sort of engine effect starting and getting higher and higher.

after the break, kick is killed again and try to use equaliser on your melody to make it a bit sharper.

don't cutoff the hihats again.


overall, it's a nice track, i like it, but make some more changes, but it's nice to c u get better on your sound :)