Electrobel

Nice breaks, but a bit repetetive. Maybe add some melodies, some more bass variation...
greets

indeed a bit repetative, and needs more layers...
try to EQ the bass abit better and make the low fresuencies a bit louder...

and that Die sample is a bit loud no?

I hear progress...cheers

not to bad but it's like it's missing some freq on the high en low spectrum, also i would layer your kick with an other one mabey even two if it's not enough, to get a punchier kick.

it's def not bad but maybee layering more (like cruize said) isn't a bad plan...and it's a bit short no?

thx for the encouragement guys! im quite noob (started november 2007) but working minimum 4, 5 h each day on music... this track isnt finish, but i expect for the next year i will make something good enought for me ...