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Krael - Slither

Slither

 
Krael [be]
Genre: Drum n Bass
License: BY-NC-ND
Duration: 4m52s
Created: 17 years ago
Uploaded: 17 years ago
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Listened: 87 times
 

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Well, this is my third DnB attempt, think I'm getting if not close, then at least near. The first 1.5 mins is a bit slowgoing, should add something, but don't really know what, and the intro could use more work too. I'm not sure if it needs more small breaks or so, think it does, but no idea of how and when. And overall it could use another baseline presumably. Let me know what you think, and please enjoy.

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CruizeOfFiction [be] - 17 years ago

good job, tho it lacks some variation..
Those breaks sound a bit overdistorted, maybe clean them up a bit & mix them a bit better...

nice atmo & such
just the bass sounds a bit to mono maybe try widening it with some desto some phasering & compressing....

keep up
 

Kreyz [be] - 17 years ago

sounding good so far man
like cruize said : more variation
you could also try to give the drop more impact, give it more build up towords the drop.
blijve gaan dude
 

Rabauw [be] - 17 years ago

Good work so far, but ain't finished yet indeed.

I recognize your typical dark style, there's still that paranoid factor brooding over your music.

I don't think just the bass that sounds mono, imo the track overall is too empty/mono-sounding.

The beats itself are pretty good, but the music lacks width, depth and variation.
Your basic ideas are pretty okay, now you have to develop them further, and put more into this track.

A sub bass melody would indeed be good for starters, the bass synth isn't sufficient enough. It's good as a filler, but the focus should not be on it.

Also, I'd like to hear some special fx in my left and right ear, play around with the panning.
 
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