Electrobel

the beat is a bit too light, regarding both strength and flow, it should sound more like a whole thing, see ?
But it is well composed, though the track needs a bit more evolution, a story...

nice try! i dont want to be bully, but maybe try to make a dnb track before trying to mixing with other kind of music. Your drum is a non-sense, there is no bass... There is a classical dnb rythm for the drums (kick 1time, snare 3time, kick 5time, snare 6time) if its the first time you make dnb... keep that structure before trying to go further. Dont give up n Good Luck

thx for your comments and your advices, 'll keep them in mind...:)
edit: liquidd, I listened to some of your tracks, like them.