Electrobel

Hi mate,
for A first try it's not bad,
maybe some tips,
first of all that vocal (it's A nice vocal)
but try to use it o A special way not just all the time.
2> you got nice kicks but they are to far in the background of the song.
3>i's A little bit empy try to use more breakz,percusion,fx & that shit.
4> Try to do something on your mastering.
5> Whats happening on 2,35min?
let your vacal flow into that last piece.
but after all nice try keep up because they are some pieces who are fat!!
I hope I helpt you with this?
cheers
Aceton

i would make ur Hcore kick more agressive :) (if i was u )
and use more breakz:)
but then again no one iz perfect ;)
PEAZ OUT
KHAOZ ENGINE

yes thank you i m working on the new version =)

capleton ^^

i would also not use the whole song but parts.
ncie first try

it's a song with a lot of agression in it so your breaks could come more upfront and maybe some pads and fx, then you'll create a more full song

bless
IrieSpirit