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HyeVolture - rays of clarity
Description
umoedr!first dnb-song I'm really happy with. I already got comments on my snare, so don't be shy to fucking comment on it, I already called your mother a goddamn whore!!! mastering was a bit difficult, same as mix (what to pinpoint?) I preferred a heavy sub, although sometimes it's maybe a bit risky. the ending is something like the beginning of a new song I will never make, dubsteplike, just like those dnb-songs you downloaded where the ending always was the beginning of new song, when it was picked out of a mix, I used to like such endings :p
rays of clarity, like the rays of the sun shining on your thoughts afters a storm, when a moment of clarity strikes you like a clear sky.
I put a bill hicks clip in it, not because I like drugs so much, but because the man was too funny, RIP!
edit: I hate edits. I changed the bass on many points. changed some other things too. I consider this finished now, my learning process will continue in other creative moments, because seriously: mastering and mixing is necessary, but when it takes most of the time, it can slow your creativity waaaay down. btw: where can I buy good stereo boxes from around 300 euros? tell me that instead of giving comments on mixing and mastering please.
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Comments
CruizeOfFiction [be] - 15 years ago
but indeed the mixdown isn't all that, you should realy look into that...
thumb up!
Omyiga [be] - 15 years ago
mooie opbouw enal, lot of variatie
the drums sound a bit weird but ja, that's probably because you didn't use standard dnbsamples
Rag [be] - 15 years ago
but good idea, has potential me thinks...
HyeVolture [be] - 15 years ago
omyiga: drums are made with ableton drumkits, as always (until now) in my songs.
rag: thnx for the bass-tip, I already heard some differences on speakers, like sub disappearing, where I clearly hear it on my phones. I will fix bass. "Tension gets lost but comes back" sounds like a good build-up for me :p
Rag [be] - 15 years ago
teebo [be] - 15 years ago
Skip [be] - 15 years ago
the climax should explode much more I think.And the melody's after it, are a bit too different from the part before the climax imho.
verry nice stringmelodies/harmoniez.
vree gewaagd,
Idd also use more shike shike shike shike.shakers niewaar.
is voor voor uw drive.
puik
particle [be] - 15 years ago
Tjahzi [be] - 15 years ago
IskaRiot [be] - 15 years ago
not so fond of that circusorgel somewhere in there, other synths sound yummie to me. forget what i said about the bass earlyer, sounds good here, and no dropouts on my woofer... or at least none that i noticed
up to the next one!
CruizeOfFiction [be] - 15 years ago
I also notice you're breaks are made yourself out of different hits!
CUDOS! (everyone samples breaks in dnb lately :() maybe layer it with an existing break for more push & such (now it sounds a tad to acoustic) layering is real important when it comes to dnbbreaks^^
thumb up!
HyeVolture [be] - 15 years ago
IskaRiot [be] - 15 years ago
ook al wilde geen comments alsk u nie kan zeggen waar ge speakers kunt halen, pech, nog een duimke voor de hye ;)
(meest entertainende dnb dak dit jaar hoorde, hoera)
HyeVolture [be] - 15 years ago
IskaRiot [be] - 15 years ago
dan mijn comment wel, ma den duim nie...
ebel is fucking with me!
HyeVolture [be] - 15 years ago
Omyiga [be] - 15 years ago
khaat da technisch gedeelte ook
vanaf dat t echt tegen uw goesting is moet ge der nimeer aan prutsen zou ik zeggen
Kheb just 2 dagen geleden boxkes gekocht van logitech van 37€; me zo'n subwoofer; kvind da al mega goe geluid. tis maar om te zeggen.. maja mss benkik ne noob e :p
owja bassen klinken ier idd goe/beter
Anonymous [be] - 15 years ago
The snare needs some more fattening from distorted white noise especially after the break at 1.35 where I also expect a cymbal ride or some long on-tick sound. Something my mother wouldn't like in this music is the really soft kick. Try adding some mid-punching kick sounds and complete the drums by adding more arms to your mechanical drummer. I pretty much enjoyed this song :) thanks - EatMe [nl]
StorungStelle [be] - 15 years ago
otherwise, no further comments
Rag [be] - 15 years ago
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Axiomatic [be] - 15 years ago
Anonymous [be] - 15 years ago
Larz
HyeVolture [be] - 15 years ago
AnnoM [be] - 15 years ago