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particle - traveller without destination
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been working like a mad man lately, this is one the tracks i made the last few days, very happy with itmade this track like mind circuit bend for my liveset at toyfabric 7 so i hope it shakes u :)
still some errors in it (compositional bitch) and not completely finished, should have more coherence between beats and the rest of the song
open for suggestions :)
hooray , an edit: added some stuff, corrected some, more details, maybe gonna work some more on it later i'm not sure
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CruizeOfFiction [be] - 15 years ago
Akwalek [be] - 15 years ago
only minor imho is that it indeed needs a destination, a climax in melody, maybe some other ingredients as variation
Omyiga [be] - 15 years ago
maybe put the beats a little beat upfront?
i kinda agree with akwalek, mss ietske minder van die snelle synthjes naar t einde toe; otherwise it get's a bit "te veel van 't goeie"
(despite my bithcing comment i really think this is already really nice é)
dialekte [be] - 15 years ago
Ndus3alFrequenC [be] - 15 years ago
Great song, nice playing with the breaks.. i love it! :)
Grts
teebo [be] - 15 years ago
i really like it... it's very expressive, good melodies, good beats, good composition, atmo.... and it's very original as well, i can't wait to hear it on toyfabric. thumbs up!
IskaRiot [be] - 15 years ago
my 2cents: maybe a snareke of hihatje da zo al wa begint te tss-tss-tssen voor de break invalt?
oh some chinees stringskes, would fit that pad i think
Skip [be] - 15 years ago
the lead synth reminds me of some ,I dont know-Daft punk or sumting,the sound of it é :))
I like how its rather organicly composed (kzou't keer willen zien ;) )
Ow and funny, the breaks/beats remind me alot of Mnemonck's beats sometimes,maybe its that snare with the shakers/hhats used.
minor would be the suddn, dissonant melo at the end
(ik zou die juust als outro met fade-out gebruiken zo,ma das ik é....zo voo gevoel van;to be continiued)
and maybe at the last minute,introduce a punchyer kick.
1up* for Partacla'h...!
Rag [be] - 15 years ago
just nice track,
but needs some finishing idd (i agree with most other suggestions ;) )
alkaloid [be] - 15 years ago
HyeVolture [be] - 15 years ago
particle [be] - 15 years ago
omihoshbin [be] - 15 years ago
oke there's some nice detail in here, the melos are nicely panned, you could pan the beat a bit aswel (hi hats and glitch) also the beat could be more upfront, perhaps layer the snare here and there^^
btw, i heard you live in ghent city now? yay^^
omihoshbin [be] - 15 years ago
Tjahzi [be] - 15 years ago
really cool intro, like it when the atmo changes round 2 mins but then to relapse into the intro. nice compo!
adrenalin [be] - 15 years ago
Mnemonck [be] - 15 years ago
Voxcoder [be] - 15 years ago
Rag [be] - 15 years ago
ZARk [be] - 15 years ago
Tjahzi [be] - 15 years ago
still ike this song, especially the intro !
Omyiga [be] - 15 years ago
kga t keer saven denkik; )
Skip [be] - 15 years ago
AnnoM [be] - 15 years ago
cobrider [be] - 14 years ago
Erophin [be] - 13 years ago