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particle - traveller without destination

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been working like a mad man lately, this is one the tracks i made the last few days, very happy with it
made this track like mind circuit bend for my liveset at toyfabric 7 so i hope it shakes u :)
still some errors in it (compositional bitch) and not completely finished, should have more coherence between beats and the rest of the song
open for suggestions :)

hooray , an edit: added some stuff, corrected some, more details, maybe gonna work some more on it later i'm not sure


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CruizeOfFiction [be] - 15 years ago

great track
 

Akwalek [be] - 15 years ago

lekker vriend, LEKKER und into backup...
only minor imho is that it indeed needs a destination, a climax in melody, maybe some other ingredients as variation
 

Omyiga [be] - 15 years ago

crazy speedy shizzle man ^^
maybe put the beats a little beat upfront?
i kinda agree with akwalek, mss ietske minder van die snelle synthjes naar t einde toe; otherwise it get's a bit "te veel van 't goeie"
(despite my bithcing comment i really think this is already really nice é)

 

dialekte [be] - 15 years ago

reminds me some old school µ-ziq
 

Ndus3alFrequenC [be] - 15 years ago

Yeah man!
Great song, nice playing with the breaks.. i love it! :)

Grts
 

teebo [be] - 15 years ago

mas-sive track kereleeee!
i really like it... it's very expressive, good melodies, good beats, good composition, atmo.... and it's very original as well, i can't wait to hear it on toyfabric. thumbs up!
 

IskaRiot [be] - 15 years ago

intro alleen al verdient een duimke
my 2cents: maybe a snareke of hihatje da zo al wa begint te tss-tss-tssen voor de break invalt?
oh some chinees stringskes, would fit that pad i think
 

Skip [be] - 15 years ago

as said....extremely fresh man, oo yeah.
the lead synth reminds me of some ,I dont know-Daft punk or sumting,the sound of it é :))
I like how its rather organicly composed (kzou't keer willen zien ;) )
Ow and funny, the breaks/beats remind me alot of Mnemonck's beats sometimes,maybe its that snare with the shakers/hhats used.
minor would be the suddn, dissonant melo at the end
(ik zou die juust als outro met fade-out gebruiken zo,ma das ik é....zo voo gevoel van;to be continiued)
and maybe at the last minute,introduce a punchyer kick.
1up* for Partacla'h...!
 

Rag [be] - 15 years ago

nice one! cool vibe nice melo's 'n stuff
just nice track,
but needs some finishing idd (i agree with most other suggestions ;) )
 

alkaloid [be] - 15 years ago

cool melodies, nice track!
 

HyeVolture [be] - 15 years ago

the beginning is not really my thing. a bit too much kermisachtig :D melodywise wel cool. a bit like the flashbulb with a kind of daft punk sound. nice beats. end does remind me of prog metal like dream theater and such :D I like the threatening pad at the end.
 

particle [be] - 15 years ago

thanks for the advice peoples i will definately take it in count!:)
 

omihoshbin [be] - 15 years ago

hehe, nice, weird melodies, kinda like some steve vai guitar solo.
oke there's some nice detail in here, the melos are nicely panned, you could pan the beat a bit aswel (hi hats and glitch) also the beat could be more upfront, perhaps layer the snare here and there^^
btw, i heard you live in ghent city now? yay^^
 

omihoshbin [be] - 15 years ago

haha, didn't see hoogegier's comment, idd dream theater^^
 

Tjahzi [be] - 15 years ago

nice man!
really cool intro, like it when the atmo changes round 2 mins but then to relapse into the intro. nice compo!
 

adrenalin [be] - 15 years ago

whoow great tunes!
 

Mnemonck [be] - 15 years ago

me like :-)
 

Voxcoder [be] - 15 years ago

echt vette track man zeer vernieuwend
 

Rag [be] - 15 years ago

cool!
 

ZARk [be] - 15 years ago

niceeeee
 

Tjahzi [be] - 15 years ago

nice update.
still ike this song, especially the intro !
 

Omyiga [be] - 15 years ago

nice update man;
kga t keer saven denkik; )
 

Skip [be] - 15 years ago

sublime stuff kerel, I enjoy ten volste again,gigantisch schoone diepgang door melo's en reverb. greetz
 

AnnoM [be] - 15 years ago

very clean melodies, agree fully with skip. nice!
 

cobrider [be] - 15 years ago

man your good!
 

Erophin [be] - 13 years ago

crazy but nicely done
 
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