Electrobel

Yio Grim
good (imo)
but theres alot of insecurity in this track,in the mood I mean.Verry "grey".
I would try to add an element for a low melody,now you have the low padz, but they are verry static,(not much melody-movement) so one extra element for melody might bring some spark to the whole piece(and you alreaddy have the main high-melody,so adding a low one would fit I think),but that might not be the intention in this track.
It misses some specialness (?)
otherwise,nice attempt, and looking forward to other attempts.

nice 1st one!!

Ni sjlech ;-)

Nice synths in the second part, it's clear you are largely influenced by ambient and that's painted all over the track.
But good job!

@ rabauw: thx dude :) and you are right actually, i actually intended to maintain my ambient influences. trying to work on a own sound :)

@ skip: i must agree with what you are saying about the "specialness" and with the low pads+melo.
after reading your comment i worked on it, but evetually decided to keep it this way. for me this track was mainly about the percussion and to work on my slice-sampling-... techniques for the perc.
thx for the comments dudes!

nice. some extra higher perc/drums in there would be nice

really like this one ! nice work on synths , very cool beat