Electrobel

i enjoyed, rly not bad for a first time
just a lil tip mayby add soem more bass and other snare that dont got reverb or somethign like that :p
but we'll see how u'r final versie of it sounds like

keep it up !

very nice for a first try!
i'm ok with the advices of Th3Shift.
keep up!

First part sounded very fruitfull for me, not so found of those sounds.
It was also more like a two step house kinda structure.
But the second part from 0.45 is phat shit, cool bassound there.
Try to make that sound a bit dirtier.
Listen to other dnb songs for the structure of ur kick, hi's and snares!
Just take some time on ur track and it will become better!
Good job already for first try!

thx for the advice, i'll work on it! :)

first track :o
sounds ALOT better then mine :D
bpm could go a bit higher , makes it more rolling.I have to agree on those fruity sounds. you have alot to discover :) slicer , granulizer, plugins(!)
don't distort it to much, use fast dist or something but stay in the green or yellow with your monitor (red = nono :p, always remember that)
youtube clips are handy asswel for inspiration
and yes the part at 0:45 is a really good sound to base your track on.
thumb for the starting track , welcome ;)

o love your sounds but i would make it faster greets