Electrobel

maybe a bit to fast,just a bit, cool concept, work it out a little with some melody change or something

i'm not sure where you want to go with this track... choice of sounds doesn't really apeal to me. especially the muffled kickdrum and the constant bassy sound.

there are to much elements in the same frequency range fighting for attention in the mix...

i think by changing some sounds and maybe eq-ing you could get much more dynamics in this song.

sorry but not my cup of tea..

This could be a goodie, but as dorkbot says, some eq is needed, also go easy on the reverb, it tends to mash it up ...
but it has potential
I would lose the high synth sound though...

a can plug my guitar right in now when a hear this song ! bad mixed ! but an nice song whith many plus points in it when you work it out !

yes work on it mate !

i agree with all comments guys
it just doesn't blow out of the speakers like it should
i tried reworking it but it did'nt improve a whole lot
i'll probably take another shot at it later
greets kris

So lets take another shot of our finest beverage and give it another go Kris.
Let the beast go!!!!