Electrobel

Nice melody, nice rythmic line, but really need some fx background, dimentionalise it !

cool track!

i cud master it for you, and the fx :p

hello ! :) it's a good start ! nice melo's
keep on workin on it !!

Very nice melodies indeed and the rhythm is entertaining too :) But it souds indeed a little "flat". And unfortunately it's very short too. But if you keep up going this way you'll be producing some really kick-ass trax in the future!

i like the beats... it makes remember my beginnings with fruity !

yeah, some remastering and fx to cover that fruity beat ;-)

the compo is very good...!

nice nice, keep up the good work, you'll get there

very very very cool melody, beats are nice too
cheerful stuff :))

Thx everyone to commanting...and thx for the welcoming :)

aloha.reminds me of some classical stuff.good start saarah.only thing i could remark is keep working on song building.but already good going.cheers

great song!
can't comment on mastering n stuff (cause mine is much worse ;) )

Good start, add some fx

i really like it, good beats and good melody. allthough the beginning tune lasts a little to long. butt you're doing it the right way, keep on going.

Really like that string part around 1:04. Needs some deep bass to make it warmer. Throw in some sensitive backing chords and you’ll get something nice.

beatuiluf gnos miss! verry pterry! veerrry verrrry pritty!
work on it

don't feel obliged to stay in a 4/4 rythm ... you should deffinately try out some 1/16, 1/32 or even 1/64 ... (or 2/16, ... :))) that way, your song will 'feel' a lot more at ease. Right now, i get the impression that when you where working on your song, you suddenly remembered you still had some groceries to do, you promised a friend to help out with painting his living room, still had some dishes left in the sink, and that your parents, along with the rest of your family where cummin' over for your bithday, tonite :))
you get my drift, right?
;)

sympax
it has a great potential but i guess it need more variations
more longer with a cool instru (piano or sax for example)
i agree with Elfen with the 4X4

the sounds sound a bit artificial, aleja, i mean you can hear it's made with fruity, but don't take that too serious because, the melodies and the song itself is pretty good ! :))

Very nice harmony & melodic part. Perhaps you have to work on the rythmic parts sound.

hehe it s one of my old track...:)