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filmjolk - Hoop (en herinnering)

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because there is always hope, my love...


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the ideas are good i think, but not very happy about the sequencing -_-

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SpazzMano [be] - 7 years ago

good sensation, use more FX for the ending, ( reverb, n'hésite pas a abuser de lui notamment sur la voix je pense que ca donnerai une belle ampleur au morceau
one of your best with the dark contest pièce
 

MucH [be] - 7 years ago

Nice trip !!!

i like it :)
 

meutn [be] - 7 years ago

Nice trip indeed! Really like the soundscape here it's very dreamy. An atmosphere wich reminds me a tiny bit of marumari. The vocals sound a bit errmm scherp, maybe it's because i can't put my volume too loud here right now.. Anyways very nice work :))
 

filmjolk [be] - 7 years ago

marumariiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii n_n
thanks meutn! they were one of my favourite band a few years ago!
 

BpOlar [be] - 7 years ago

Nice atmosfere ... not very fond of the vocal " hoop & herinnering"
Don't like Dutch vocals anyway ... maybe the vocals better in French ..
 

Daiky [be] - 7 years ago

Hoi,
First track that I hear from you, I really liked the melody instrument and the atmostphere.
2 remarks only. It's a bit short, and I would have liked a bit of processing on the vocal to make it blend in with the music.
thumbs up.
 

liquidbass [be] - 7 years ago

I really love this one!
 

teebo [be] - 7 years ago

zeer mooi
een ideale lied voor nu
waarvoor dank!
 

liquidbass [be] - 7 years ago

added to favz!

and in my downloaded-atwork-playlist!
 

HarryPoppins [be] - 7 years ago

Hoop en herinnering sounds like she's the only one left after a disaster, floating round somewhere.. sick ambiance, very nice, i like, good,.. byebye
 

Stakha [be] - 7 years ago

great great great...
 

Zool [be] - 7 years ago

very beautiful, but i agree that the vocals should be treated a bit, it sounds too close for the atmosphere of the music
but i put in in my favs anyway!
 

adya [be] - 7 years ago

your song reminds of an image of a lake with lot's of fog and mystical things.
like it very much
 

eeezzeepeezzeee [be] - 7 years ago

This song does sth very strange to me which I'm not able to define yet.. lovely effects, nice synths.. very sharp vocal which makes it even more special.
Groeten
 

aia [be] - 7 years ago

hem, what to say...

I prefer to be honest, like I expect everybody to be honest with me, that's the only way to make things better.

So :

The introduction is too long.
The voice needs effects, maybe also glitches (like funkstörung) ? That would be fine but it is not necessary. You have a nice voice but you seems to be afraid/ashamed of the mic ... lol, shout your "hoop", whisper your "herinnering" like a wave. The mic will not eat you.

Nice sound textures, nice ideas, but as you said, the sequencing was a bit disappointing but not a reason to give a thumbs down, nor a thumbs up.

I know you can do better, so, when you get some time to work on this, it would be fine to achieve it. Meanwhile, put this track in ICZ ... ?
 

filmjolk [be] - 7 years ago

i will rework it but now i only want to be sleep. or dead.
and the voice is not mine btw.
 

aia [be] - 7 years ago

[quote]the voice is not mine[/quote]
Still a nice voice ;)
Are you in exams ? If so, how it's doing ?
 

meutn [be] - 7 years ago

Aia, your being so negative mate, i think the silent words give the whole a claustrophobic effect, something unconvenient yet cosy ( hope you can catch my drift somehow cause claustrophobics don't have much to do with music :D ) and wich **nt gave a thumb down without even giving a decent comment? Anyways, somehow this song makes me think of arty animation movies, caused by this subtle nice arty atmosphere, this song strongly brings feelings up. And if a song does, it's good no mattter what. (and marumari rocks ! )
 

HyeVolture [be] - 7 years ago

nice dark sound.
over de titel: u slaagt erin de twee meest moeilijke gevoelens die een mens kan ervaren te bundelen in een titel, wat me al van in het begin overtuigt van de sterkte vanw at ik te horen zal krijgen (gezonde vooroordelen noemt men dat). Doe zo voort!
 

aia [be] - 7 years ago

not negative, objective, she can do better & she knows it, if she was plenty satisfied with this track she probably wouldn't have wrote that she was not very happy about the sequencing. writing something like that is like shouting for help.

sometimes, things must go out, even before it became almost perfect (as perfection does not exist)
 

filmjolk [be] - 7 years ago

aia is right, i'm not satisfied with the song as it is right now. i plan to rework it, i hope i could make something out of it.
@ HyeVolture : i'm not a very good dutch speaker, but i think i've understood what you said...
 

HyeVolture [be] - 7 years ago

I said that hope and memory are the two most heavy feelings a human being could experience, so that I already liked the song by seeing the title, what I called a healthy prejudice. Although, good work!
 

Kinet [be] - 7 years ago

Filmjolk,please don't touch it, it's perfect !!! The vocals are very beautyful and "warm". It reminds me the first time i heard Laurie Anderson ( long time ago, in the eighties, when she was experimenting with the first samplers ) And that little extra at the end of the translated text in English is that little cherry on the pie !!! :D
It's a little piece of music that suits perfect in an album to give the audience some air between more constructed songs.
Just leave it like it is and make some more.
 

Anonymous [be] - 7 years ago

Heel goed. Ge kunt er wa van. Ik wou dat ik het ook kon
 

filmjolk [be] - 7 years ago

ik heb niet begrepen :s
 

HarryPoppins [be] - 7 years ago

tres bien; tu etre doué, je veux aussi etre comme toi dans le muzik
 

filmjolk [be] - 7 years ago

O_o heel bedankt...
 

Phye [be] - 7 years ago

nice trip, hope is always around, you just need to open your eyes to see it...
if not, scorpion: fatality rofl
enjoyed
 

rf061992 [be] - 7 years ago

mmm...very cool track little miss....
Antoine said "beurk"....oup's.... :))
 

thot [be] - 7 years ago

great atmosphere .. love it ... hope is not so far
 

Doorchaser [be] - 7 years ago

YEAH You don't know how much I needed to hear something like this RIGHT NOW!!

This song really touched me!!!!!!

Keep on you have a talent
 

rule001 [be] - 7 years ago

geweldig!!
...bij mij brengt herinnering helaas meestal de hoop naar een nulpunt.
maar een zeer sterk nummer dat me enorm raakt.
Als je er zelf nog niet tevreden over bent, en er nog aan gaat werken, kijk ik alvast enorm uit naar een tweede versie!
(deze word alleszins opgeslagen...ik zal hem vaak kunnen gebruiken)

bedankt filmjolk!
 

dontwakemeup [be] - 7 years ago

chouette! une voix! i love when there is a voice into your music... what else?... everybody seems to love this track! i don't like to tell that kind of thing, but i'm obliged to admit that my tastes are just like everybody's tastes... (but i don't taste like everybody... enfin, je crois)
 

Rabauw [be] - 7 years ago

I have heard it a couple of times before, it's really really good...and those whispering, almost silent vocals near the end give me the shivers...I think you should use them more frequent throughout the track (maybe 4-5 times).

As for the endmix, I find the "hoop en herinnering" voice too loud, certainly since it's an ambient song. And maybe also some more reverb or a flanger on that voice cos the recording quality of the voice doesn't seem to be all too splendid (but maybe if you lower the volume of the voice it would already help you no end).
Splendid song for the lonely cold nights.
 

JeremyR [be] - 7 years ago

Really nice except that I'm not fond of the Dutch language ;)
 

edith [be] - 7 years ago

nice track ! lots of emotion,... it stays very restraint emotional, not weepy tearjerking dramatic ...so jup well done !
 

JabbaAndFollox [be] - 7 years ago

very nice...some of the sounds you use really creep up my back and give me a strange sensation: the combination of the sound of maggots or beetles or wathever together with the strings....like it a lot....(grtz phollox)
 

yenneman [be] - 7 years ago

There are insects in my ears and tears in my eyes. It's a strange feeling, it doesn't happen quite often that I get emotional because of something this minimalistic...everything fits, it doesn't need a single change imo.
 

Mnemonck [be] - 7 years ago

Like all of your songs ... . Very nice editing .. . great originality !!!

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Mnemonck [be] - 7 years ago

this one I like
 

privecomcept1 [be] - 7 years ago

cool bonne ambiance
 

virlyn [be] - 6 years ago

i saw you at amastic, gave me shivers, great song
 

Skip [be] - 6 years ago

just here to say hi,and lookin' forward to all your next creations,
you are one of a kind here on ebel,good track.
je te souhaite bonne chance dans la vie,salut ;)
 

afm [be] - 6 years ago

Incroyable,
really beautiful and warm song, excellent usage of ambient sounds. And I like the vocals, reminds me of new wave.
 

mowzow [be] - 6 years ago

verry nice stuff, but the voice claimes to much space,so he other sounds dont get the place they deserve, but thats antfucking, great song!
 

endora [be] - 3 years ago

cool
 

yaka [be] - 3 years ago

nice nice
 

delkat [be] - 2 years ago

 
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