Electrobel

rework your drums. they sound like , hrmmm... shit. lol. There are nearly only high frequenteies in it. About the rest, it's your choice, I think with good drums, it can be a very good track, the bass is all right.
Your song is .... & bass. Make it drum & bass ^^

yeah i should work on the drums, but can you explain what you mean with my use of high frequenties, (i'm a big fan of 8bit style sounds, this time i used pure synths to avoid bleeping). thx for the advice
greetz

wel i mean whole your drum sounds like if you put a high pass filter on it (only let high frequenties go through). So they loose all their power.

But if you wanted to make a more 8bit sounding song, then I can't say anything, its a matter of musical choice, like always

greetz