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particle - Close the door when you enter my head

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Icz again, finishing tracks seems like the biggest obstacle in my life..
About the song: It's bad, totally wrong, it's frankenstein's monster, it's been there for months and i still don't know what to do with it.. Yes it's weird, it's a story that tells about hate love uncertainties chaos, man , even i don't know what it's all about. It's weird that is

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Rabauw [be] - 20 years ago

Not as bad as you think. Have you thought about it making some downbeat, hiphop or triphop of it? You got some fine beats here, a nice dark background... maybe you can come up with some nice melodies and arrangements, and switch this track towards something more "dopestyle" :)
 

sapajoucoaster [be] - 20 years ago

very good stuff, massive dark impression
big up, more fx sounds maybe? nice job really
 

Kyran [be] - 20 years ago

It gave me a more trip hop feel than abient, but that's just the label. The track itself is quite ok, and not half as bad as you think
 

ELFENKOMMANDO [be] - 20 years ago

very nice
 

crap [be] - 20 years ago

nice nice nice

The last drumpart sounds very clean compared to where the drums are somewhat pushedaway by that noize. Dirtnitup I'd say.
 

Thought [be] - 20 years ago

Thanks for the good comments;) Glad you like the beats, been busy for a while with them, I shallzz continue working but "opt gemakske" - at my tempo, slow ;)
 

Kolf [be] - 20 years ago

I like it, nice sensitive approuch in sound..good ideas in panning beats. Sometimes they are quite flat, but its just detail.. Humble track; is good!!
 

rule001 [be] - 20 years ago

Nice stuff!
If all your unfinished tracks sound like this...waw...just post them ;)
maybe someone here can give advice on finishing them..
(..no, not me, my tracks suck and are all unfinished to ;) )
 

psychostorm [nl] - 20 years ago

nice basics dont change it
I like the overall sound
and i thjink you just have to put a crazy
solo on top of it
with breakz and cuts or so and tweaking the cutoff together with some resonance sweeps.
:)grt
 

bram [be] - 20 years ago

Overwhelming soundscapes! Boards of Canada style. But have to agree with kolf, your beats are sounding a bit "statik"...

edit: hmmmz at the beginning that is, if i listen further they are actually A-OK. Good stuff. Digg it.
 

Distreality [be] - 20 years ago

great song, but I have this remark:
I would add some fx to the beats and the snare...some delay here and there...

for the rest : coooool !!!
 

Krankort [be] - 20 years ago

:)
 

TheThreatOfDawn [be] - 20 years ago

And the price for best title-song-match goes to:.... THOUGHT! I'd have a hard time imagining the feeling behind this song, but with such a strong title I see all kinds of stuff when I listen to this song!! I like the long strange sound that slightly seems to drops out of key from time to time. I adore it.
The drums remind me of Enigma (don't know if you'll take that as a compliment)
I'd peronally ad some kind of over-reverbed pianomelody, but i guess that's a mather of styles and tastes. Thump up!
 

Thought [be] - 20 years ago

Thx a lot everyone! Seems it's not as bad as i thought:D But due to a computercrash i lost almost all my files so this one won't be finished i think.. maybe one day who knows :)
 

Thought [be] - 20 years ago

@ threat: I'll take the piano idea in consideration, seems like a good idea!
 

Doorchaser [be] - 20 years ago

Perhaps a monster but I'm frankly in love with the abstract atmosphere. VERY VERY BOC. I'm gonna keep an eye on you, you have some fanastic shit over here!!
 

Voxcoder [be] - 19 years ago

i like it alouth, give it some good old computer speech!
 

Distreality [be] - 19 years ago

real good
 

meutn [be] - 19 years ago

thanks ;)
 

Doorchaser [be] - 19 years ago

Still lovin it !!
 

Skip [be] - 19 years ago

eeeeh...whats up doc?(mahaha...)
vast and kinda massiv this one.
I see massiv square forms or something,and then somebody riding a mechanical-sort of vehicule(the beat).
hmmm...interesting
yéééét!
 
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